Chapter 8, Page 56 *UPDATED*
Added 2024-11-16 02:36:36 +0000 UTCI don't know if this page plays the way I hoped. It's leading to something, I swear, but I hope it doesn't feel like filler. I do love Ellie
I don't know if this page plays the way I hoped. It's leading to something, I swear, but I hope it doesn't feel like filler. I do love Ellie's expression in the last panel, though.
*UPDATES - Never change, comment section. Thank you to everyone that pointed out the problems with this page. I am much happier with it now! I Added the riding crop to panel 3, changed Meg in the final panel so she doesn't look like she's smacking Ellie, and made a few other small changes Kept the original page up for comparison.
Moving on to the next page! Have a great weekend everyone!
Comments
Honestly, one of the biggest win's I've seen in a long time.
The Other Greg
2024-11-19 16:41:29 +0000 UTCI think that's what Ellie is hoping for.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2024-11-17 17:14:50 +0000 UTCLike the redo, makes it better in showing Meg is looking out for her Sub, although the instructions were Umm,Ummm, Ummmmm
Bruce Burding
2024-11-17 11:28:03 +0000 UTCThanks! I can fix that.
Stereoscope Comics
2024-11-17 06:37:29 +0000 UTCI don't know if this was just a happy accident in the redo but now it makes it look like Meg took the riding crop back because Ellie was mumbling and wanted her to speak more clearly.
Florena Emberlin
2024-11-17 04:12:23 +0000 UTCI dunno about that, but PLEASE let Ellie end up completely naked and teased. Let's face it, that's what she wants. The more she does this, the braver she'll become. She's probably not ready to be fully screwed quite yet, but I give her no more than two more sessions before the dildo's come out!
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2024-11-17 02:24:43 +0000 UTCAnd if not a fucking, then at least fully naked. It's why they can be a lesbian couple. Meg struck lucky with Ellie, she exactly what she needs in the perfect sub.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2024-11-17 02:22:07 +0000 UTCProbably not, but things DO definingly progress as fast as I was hoping.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2024-11-17 02:20:44 +0000 UTCOh hell I hope they are, which would make extra spicy content make sense. Come on, someone screw someone else, PLEASE!! (Probably not that far in this comic, but let's at least see Ellie fully naked and teased. It would lend perfectly to Sam's conversion later on.)
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2024-11-17 02:19:52 +0000 UTCIt's amazing how just moving a word makes it pop out more. I also love that you trust the reader enough to understand that Meg took out the rod to better understand Ellie between the 3rd and 4th panel
Rick
2024-11-17 01:48:48 +0000 UTCIn today's episode of things- most-content-creators-don't-get to-say-often: "never change, comment section." You're doing great dude.
spencer
2024-11-17 01:45:54 +0000 UTCNo, but the fact that they match up is a little detail I threw in! So happy someone noticed!
Stereoscope Comics
2024-11-17 01:14:03 +0000 UTCOh, Meg. {Sigh} *Now* you've done it. You broke her.
George
2024-11-17 00:31:12 +0000 UTCclassic just classic i love it
michael D
2024-11-17 00:22:38 +0000 UTCI'm getting a "wt actual f; I'm losing my favorite game!" vibe from Meg right now...
Amber7
2024-11-16 19:25:13 +0000 UTCI really like this page. It's part of the dorky magic that really makes your comic special!
Clash
2024-11-16 18:53:09 +0000 UTCWas the “Ha Ha Haa” her attempt at using her safe word (uh uh uhhh)? I know it could just be her laughing but can also see a scenario where she over excitedly tries to use the safe word but we all know how specific Meg can be about her instructions.
DuskStealth
2024-11-16 15:13:55 +0000 UTCOh Ellie....so classic....now the game will really begin Spicy Here's what I Love about you....you really think as a switch as you draw. Meg is wanting to be a good Dom as she trains her Sub, but is not prepared for the insatiable playfullness of Ellie, now the question is, after suppressing the sensation, are Ellie's panties wet 😘
Bruce Burding
2024-11-16 11:17:22 +0000 UTCAww, that's cute. Ellie wins, but so does Meg. I had been betting on a different outcome. PS. Are you sure you're using the right fonts in the right places? Seems to me like Meg should be speaking in domme at least in the first panel (and possibly in all of them).
Amber7
2024-11-16 10:59:36 +0000 UTCShe wins meg gets tied up now!
engagecrayfish0
2024-11-16 09:23:14 +0000 UTCOhhh, she's going to regret being that bratty. Egg timer or no. :-D
Seigmann
2024-11-16 08:51:36 +0000 UTCI might move the ‘Ding’ sound effect. It kinda blends in where it is. Thanks!
Stereoscope Comics
2024-11-16 06:35:31 +0000 UTCI…i forgot…the riding crop…in panel 3. ^^;;;;; Thanks for the save!
Stereoscope Comics
2024-11-16 06:34:23 +0000 UTCAh-ha! No wonder this was bugging me. Panel 3 it should still be in her mouth. I swear, first it was the collar, then the leash and now the flogger.🤣
Stereoscope Comics
2024-11-16 06:33:05 +0000 UTC‘I thought for a sec that Meg had slapped her.’ And now I can’t unsee it!😅
Stereoscope Comics
2024-11-16 06:31:44 +0000 UTCGood eye
Rick
2024-11-16 06:20:44 +0000 UTCIt did go off. There's a little "Ding" in the bottom corner of the second-last panel.
Thunder
2024-11-16 06:19:47 +0000 UTCMeg's just going to smugly point out Ellie dropped the crop :3
Felin
2024-11-16 06:12:02 +0000 UTCHappy Ellie is happy to have made it a minute... next goal, an hour
Nchalada
2024-11-16 05:19:18 +0000 UTCI am very very interested to see where this goes!...
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2024-11-16 03:39:24 +0000 UTCXDDDDD
Alice dream
2024-11-16 03:21:18 +0000 UTCShe was counting the seconds to prove Meg wrong, lol
Canti
2024-11-16 03:17:57 +0000 UTCEllie's face absolutely makes it a great page
AThrowawayJoke
2024-11-16 03:11:34 +0000 UTCooooh, the timer! hahahah She did it! XD I really love the expression work on this page, really well done.
kou32
2024-11-16 03:02:40 +0000 UTCDon't worry, it doesn't feel like filler. Great expressions and showing that there can always ve fun in a scene
Jarnathan Slabdash
2024-11-16 03:00:46 +0000 UTCI wonder what reward she gets for getting Meg to break character lol. Edit:of course she did not make 60 seconds if the egg timer did not go off so she still looses.
Rick
2024-11-16 02:46:34 +0000 UTCAlso wanted to add, did the Riding Crop move between panels? Nothing huge, just curious.
Brad Kitts
2024-11-16 02:44:50 +0000 UTCOk this is one of my favorite panels haha I love it
Michael Kehoe
2024-11-16 02:44:50 +0000 UTCInb4 the next page reveals Meg doesn't plan on stopping just cause a minute has passed.
Brad Kitts
2024-11-16 02:44:16 +0000 UTCEllie ain't admitting defeat just yet!! Wait, wasn't the crop supposed to stay in her mouth?
Death of Ink
2024-11-16 02:43:14 +0000 UTCSeeing the image preview I thought for a sec that Meg slapped her LOL. Ellie is such a gremlin, I love their dynamic. This is what happens when you invite D&D gremlins to BDSM.
Florena Emberlin
2024-11-16 02:42:05 +0000 UTCI forgot about the timer... Good job
Karp The Mad
2024-11-16 02:40:58 +0000 UTCEllie is such a brat and I love it :D
CREE8
2024-11-16 02:40:01 +0000 UTCI swear Meg is about slap her. I don’t know. 🤷♂️
NovaWinter
2024-11-16 02:38:39 +0000 UTC
