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Added 2024-09-14 01:32:33 +0000 UTCIt's about a girl who improves her technical skills.
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback! I really appreciate the points you’ve raised. Moving forward, I’ll focus on improving the portrayal of the girls' psychological changes and the boys' confusion in a world where only the girls experience such extraordinary growth.
girl grow club
2024-09-14 14:53:34 +0000 UTCThis was a cool story, but there are a few problems with it. 1. Why doesn’t the “master” (or any of the teacher figures) ever improve along with the girls? 2. Shouldn’t the girls recognize they their talents aren’t really theirs? After all, they’re because of the “growth sound”. 3. I see it in the other stories, but the second the girl manages to beat the boys in their talent, they rub it in their face for the rest of the story. In other words, why are the girls so petty most of the time? I feel like they would at least try to help the boys out. 4. Why haven’t any of the boys recognized that there’s definitely something off about how sudden the girls’ growth is?
bheast
2024-09-14 11:23:34 +0000 UTC
