The Ladder Chapter 23
Added 2022-01-15 06:01:00 +0000 UTCPetyr deals with the repercussions from last chapter, and makes a life changing decision for him and his new family!
Comments
So, Not sure what all the hate is about. But personally been really digging the story man. It's also nice to appreciate the frustration that Peter must have to deal with starting over from scratch again, you know having to deal with problems that show up during ruling is a pretty regular thing in stories, the whole Protagonist encountering and overcoming adversity. Being a father and a Stepfather as well I really don't understand this Cuck thing, I am thinking these people just wanted another Self Insert I am all that is man God fic that they can enjoy to their hostile masculinity can imagine. Anywho, I love it man, been great reading, and keep it up.
Mike Stewart
2022-01-26 11:33:42 +0000 UTCTo continue as well, the whole dropping all he’s put into the little fingers, all the work... just to have to start anew? That to me worse than the whole Ashara plot twist that honestly wasn’t even good and is still majorly stupid in my opinion. So... yeah. Goodbye, dropping this in its entirety. Like... what’s the point of all that work and effort, all the character interactions and how the war developed if it’s come to this? You took all the interesting stuff and just decided to light it on fire.
Maleficarum
2022-01-15 22:53:59 +0000 UTCYeah. After seeing your most recent chapter on FF and coming here to see the others... I have to say what started as a good story rapidly has fallen into mediocrity. The choices you’ve taken with your plot, how you’ve forced this conflict to turn with your character’s decisions. On multiple steps it reeks of forced idiocy. I could wax lyrical and go in depth on every single point on what went wrong. But, I don’t have the energy. I don’t want to waste more time on this story than I have, in this major disappointment. Besides on this chapter and last people have already commented fairly well the issues I myself found with it.
Maleficarum
2022-01-15 22:51:16 +0000 UTC
