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Defiant Chapter 21

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'Inside of the Land of Fire. You had him right underneath our noses the entire time…'


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I wouldn't say for nothing. Now he just has to work even harder.

I really don’t like the direction this story is headed. Why do authors always feel the need to nerf their main characters, now Naruto has lost YEARS of training and development… all for nothing

Psyren1596

I can see what you mean by that. But I won’t skip over Lee’s death at all. It’s just that at this moment, it’s as if Naruto is waking up a day later you know? He hadn’t really had time to process it all yet. But he will, that’s for sure! I’ll try and show it in the future!

It seems that the story is getting a little rushed. Lee’s death was last chapter and all of a sudden its a time skip. Similar to the chunin exams, it went by quite fast without us seeing an epic clash between the hokage/jirayia/kakash and orochimaru/hashi/tobi. I wish you focused more on the aftermath of Lee’s death and the impact of that. Also I get how you think Naruto is progressing too fast, but I think you could have tackled it in different ways, doing more missions, less time to train and grind. Its not a video game where you can just grind whenever you want. Still looking forward to where you take us.


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