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Catherine and Odessa pt10 mp3

I had something similar to this planned but I must say a big thanks to a dear Patreon Ryan who I got some inspro from ;)

Sit back, relax while the twins prep for a ball ....

Catherine and Odessa pt10 mp3

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I love reading detailed feedback, thanks so much for taking time to do this. Also I'm glad you're feeling better now. I will being doing the ball but will take some time to put it together. Makes me happy to see other invested in the characters and story and that there are tingles of course. Takecare and have a good week!

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Hi Aura, I meant to wright this feedback earlier, but I've been sick all week. I found this episode refreshing in that I got to know the sisters' relationship better. As they seem to be getting more familiar and close to the fledgling, they are not holding back the cracks, and the toxicity in their relationship that necessitated the need for a childe vampire, who in both of them loving, could bond with each other again. Although they do love each other, and support each other, I can hear the little cracks in their traded barbs. It feels like a real conversation between sisters, who have a long history together. As for the sounds in this one, I love how they measure the fledgling the whole time. It's a little funny, like when Catherine makes Odessa start doing it, Odessa threw away all of her measurements and started over. The measurement sound itself is nice as well. For future, I hope that they get to do the masquerade ball, but rather than the dancing and the party, someone pins the fledling into a closet and threatens/mildly seduces the fledgling. They keep mentioning that they would keep the fledling safe, and that anyone would be stupid to try, so it'd be kind of fun to meet a rival vampire, and then get saved by them. Having the rival talk her way out of it, with Catherine holding Odessa back from outright murdering her. That's just a thought after hearing the dialog about how they always get into trouble. Sorry! I was imagining this after listening to it multiple times. Other ideas, wine breakfast, Odessa and drunk fledgling getting in trouble by Catherine when she catches them. Thanks again for the wonderful episode. I think I had a bad batch of blood or I would have responded sooner... =)

Ryan Trondsen


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