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NEW WORLD : Final Exam - Page 111-115 [THE END]
Added 2021-08-07 00:20:23 +0000 UTCThank you for all the supports and thank you for reading! What do you think? Do you think it's too cruel? Let me know in the comments!
Next Monday: extra chapter?
Comments
I hope so
Shiftlock
2021-08-10 00:08:07 +0000 UTCMy favourite types of stories I loved it, great job
Jason Turner
2021-08-08 12:52:23 +0000 UTCNah, no sympathy for his mom. She knew it was a shrunken person just trying to get her attention and crushed it anyway. Kevin was setup to fail, Ms. Johnson knew what she was doing and gleefully watched events unfold. She knew she was shrinking him and called his mom in ahead of time. She told him avoiding giants was all he could do and the "final test" was just to avoid being stepped on by the next person and then he was free to go and fend for himself. She made no promise she would help him later so all he knew was that he'd been abandoned on the floor for rest of his life. So of course when the first giant he sees is his own mother, he's going to try and get her attention since it was his only chance for help. He's too desperate to stop and consider his own mother is one of the cruel giants.
sandman578
2021-08-07 11:05:03 +0000 UTCThis was dark and hot. Well done. And good ending. Beyond rendering, you have talent with writing too!
Bigftlover79
2021-08-07 04:17:12 +0000 UTCSo its implied that she was told what she did? Thats pretty good. I like. Can't wait to see next project
Kastakh
2021-08-07 02:31:44 +0000 UTCI kinda like the abrupt ending. It’s kinda cruel and comical in a way. Ms. Johnson straight up told him to be careful and that you are treated differently as a tiny. Kevin didn’t listen and his own mother didn’t even recognize him and saw him only as a bug. Plus you don’t want the story to drag on with a plain conversation and I figure you have other projects to work on.
Shatrr
2021-08-07 01:49:08 +0000 UTCThis one is unlikely, to be honest. I think the ending already shows the consequences of Kevin's bad decision (Ms. Johnson already taught him to never trust any normal-sized person. Anyone, including his own mother) which ultimately lead to his mom's brutality (and her misery and guilt of killing her own son unknowingly if you believe that Ms. Johnson will tell her the whole truth). Originally, I was going to prolong the story a little bit with Ms. Johnson lying about the whole situation by making some excuses about the disappearance of Kevin so Kevin's Mom can go home without worrying about her Son's disappearance. But I can't find any realistic excuse that allows a mom to be content about her own son's disappearance. Therefore I decided not to do so.
MasterShrinker
2021-08-07 01:09:11 +0000 UTCYeah i would like that too
Shiftlock
2021-08-07 00:36:25 +0000 UTCWould love to see a chapter where we get the conversation and some closure or maybe the mothers reaction to the realization that she did her son like that.
Kastakh
2021-08-07 00:27:47 +0000 UTC
