[Review+] Just Once... If You Don't Mind? - Kalimaxos
Added 2025-09-04 14:21:09 +0000 UTCComments
I enjoyed your take on this!
MM
2025-09-28 23:38:17 +0000 UTCWell done!! I like how he took responsibility for his part of the break down of their marriage. The way she left him was for another man and totally different from what he had done it was spiteful, selfish and disrespectful of the life they had together, glad you gave him a spine to do what was right for him. Little bit of a departure for you from your usual male characters.
FU
2025-09-27 21:32:39 +0000 UTCWell I read ALL of the variants I think and I have to say the majority of them weren't very good, maybe even ALL of them? I think Vivian's is by far the best. A bit odd as since I mentioned February Sucks has had like 50 alternates and I like a number of those...
fanfoot
2025-09-16 05:09:14 +0000 UTCOkay read both the original and your conclusion. Pretty happy with both. Nice story and reasonable angst. The amount of sex and the progression from exciting to boredom was great. A lot of the male authors pretty much leave the sex out or make it really really short. Either that or its full cuckold porn. This was nice, appropriate. Worked for the story. I really liked your conclusion. My only request would be a little more closure with the wife. I need another segment, multiple paragraphs about how she's feeling, what happens to her, her kids, etc. Maybe a jump forward in time again to when she finally gets to speak to her husband at some point and apologize. Not sure. But I don't have complete closure at this point. A sequel?
fanfoot
2025-09-12 07:02:45 +0000 UTCThis deserves a sequel 😭😭😭😭
Eraysirhead
2025-09-04 21:08:14 +0000 UTCThis was one of the better takes of this open-ended tale. Like with "February Sucks" This story is one of those that will stand the test of time. The open endedness has brought about many different variations, some good, some not so good, and some just batshit insane! There is one thing i've yet to see be addressed in any continuation --before now-- was the fact that no one called out the fact that oral sex does not mean that Marcy could fuck about for 5 weeks doing at least (going by Trey's one and done - out like a light!) 35x as bad as what Rick did. (if there is one then please direct it my way so I can read it please! =D) there is always a reocurring factor during the stories are Rick's kids and how they support him fully. Marcy's newfound experiences and kinks were all for nowt as she has no one to share them with. She done fucked up there big time. The Josh and Penny dynamic was perfectly done, tears all around explains their end. Trey the narcissist needed a massive kick in the balls, even if it was from Marcy telling him that he was a shit lay and his only use was to test her new kinks. We did get her hinting at that, but the cruel git in me wanted to read what was coming to him. Poor Rick gets his heart broken due to something Marcy took and exploited the hell out of, good to see he was healing and hopefully this new fling after the divorce will heal him even more so =)
Adam_Sephenson
2025-09-04 18:58:25 +0000 UTC
