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Venting and back patting.

Chapter 9 is f*@!ing done!

This year has been a long and challenging journey for many of us, and this chapter has been no exception.

What a struggle. What a long wait! But it's finally done,  and 'oh gods' do I hope you enjoy it.

Links! Give us the links!

Links are available in this Patron exclusive release post!

As usual, we unlock for,

$5 and up Patrons - OUT NOW.

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Thank You!

As we approach the Thanksgiving holiday, I am especially thankful for everyone here on the Patreon. Ours is a crowded scene. Full of entertaining and worthy projects. I'm extremely touched that you have discovered and stuck with a small story like this one.  

Thank you all for your patience, your interest, and your support. I hate how long it took to put this chapter together for you. I hope the time and effort spent laboring over the story telling, the art, and the animations shines through.

Enjoy.

-Ancho


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Comments

Wow! Thanks for this great feedback! Really appreciate the considerate pointers and kind words! Glad you found Fantasy Valley! And yes that valley must be very broad, but no there is not currently a map.

I really like the “evolution” of (the story of) Fantasy Valley. Maybe the beginning of chapter 1 does not “catch” everyone immediately, but it soon “takes off” and develops. I’ve not really come across this media format so far, but now it looks like the perfect blend between a graphic novel and a point and click adventure game (without “pixel hunting”). But you don’t have to deal with frustrating “puzzles” with “I never would have guessed that” solutions and can just explore. I also like the “small extra pictures” in some scenes to show different perspectives / angles / details, not just the animations or the “shaking picture” in some scenes. In earlier chapters the music changed in some scenes, would be interesting to have that again. Maybe there is PD / CC music that fits in if a license is too expensive. A few scenes/images in chapter 9 look a bit “sloppy” or “changed” or “low resolution”, but that maybe adds to the “variation”. The style is still let’s say adorable, and “nasty” at the right moments, but never “dumb” or just plain vulgar. Looks like I can hope for some more “wow!”-Moments and not just good laughs. Please take your time and release ch 10 “when it’s done” (I also like to take my time and not “rush” through it). I also would like to see more “explicit scenes” that really mean something and have a long “buildup” rather than “f***ing around with everyone”. But that probably is the style of the story, better than constant dumb violence like in a “usual” fantasy story. I guess you would have to make those if you want to earn more than 500 dollars / euros a month. From ch 6 on I noticed quite a few scenes with “I wonder what would have happened if I made that choice” (or did not overlook that). Turns out I missed quite a lot, taking notes and frequent saving or when there are choices helps. But the story continues like in the “original timeline”, as stated here before. It is also wise use “h” to remove the interface in some scenes, or you could miss some of the artwork. Right now I’m “blown away” by the ending of ch 9. It even looks we could get some more “high fantasy”, but still not like in those usual stories. Oh, and I found it by looking for the term “fantasy valley” to find some images of a valley in a fantasy world. Must be a really broad valley (is there a map?).


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