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Added 2023-01-09 17:00:06 +0000 UTCVulpecula = little fox, that being saidโฆOuch, poor Johan๐ฌ
P.S.: Typo/grammar corrections are always welcome ๐
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Aha. We have a name for foxy. Also poor Johan, being some random guy.
Gem
2023-01-09 18:55:03 +0000 UTCI love commas ๐๐ But yeah, now that you mentioned, I see it too. ๐๐๐ Thanks for the help! โค๏ธ
2023-01-09 17:20:36 +0000 UTCOooh, things are getting interesting.... Typo Time: "what does Lupus wants?" should probably be "what does Lupus want?" I'll read through again when I have more time to talk about commas, but there's a couple places they could change into periods or be omitted. I get the feeling you're maybe using commas to notate a pause in speech? But you're representing pauses fairly well with the bubble breaks. ๐
Chai
2023-01-09 17:12:00 +0000 UTC
