The Sixth School. Chapter 033.
Added 2023-08-24 20:47:55 +0000 UTCHi guys,
Here is Chapter Thirty Three.
I owe you guys an apology for how long this chapter took to put out. It's just that, at the beginning of this week, we got the news that my grandma on my father's side had passed away. Majority of this week has been spent trying to plan for her funeral and such things. She'll be laid to rest tomorrow.
As always, please do take the time to give me your feedback. It means a lot to me.
Enjoy.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
Comments
My condolences, family first. 1 typo in the first paragraph "as she directed", should be "as he directed". Great chapter again.
VT
2023-08-25 13:38:25 +0000 UTCI'm glad I delivered. Thanks for the corrections.
BlaQQuill
2023-08-25 05:07:38 +0000 UTCAlso, another brilliant chapter! Lots of ways this can go, do ‘soul weapons’ exist in the dungeon’s ‘canon’, or will being able to summon one frighten off the goons? Will his bluff be called, and an epic fight scene ending in our protagonists untimely death and end of the dungeon run ensue? I’ll say one thing, you definitely know how to make the chapters exciting! Some potential edits: “The thief took it back from me?” he stated. ^ a statement shouldn’t end with a question mark “The very same one?” Greg replied his tone just as flat as his expression. ^same suggested edit, not a question but a statement
Dennis Banfield
2023-08-25 02:47:12 +0000 UTC