Editing Marathon: Chapter Ten.
Added 2024-07-30 11:43:55 +0000 UTCHi guys.
Here is Chapter Ten.
Thanks for all the help. It means a lot to me.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
Comments
#52, remove a comma : Greg couldn’t help but blush as he realized that (,) not only did he not know the name of someone
λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
2024-08-03 15:19:06 +0000 UTC#50, add a comma before when, in, or both.. Or you can remove them all: The irony of him thinking this (,) when he had what was possibly the biggest cheat in the world (,) in the form of the system, wasn’t lost on Greg.
λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
2024-08-03 15:11:29 +0000 UTC
