Editing Marathon: Chapter Thirteen.
Added 2024-08-02 10:42:26 +0000 UTCHi guys.
Chose to give you guys (and myself) a short break from the editing. We picking it up again with another three chapters today.
I'll be posting Chapter Eighty Three tomorrow.
Here is Chapter Thirteen.
Thanks for all the help. It means a lot to me.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
Comments
#47, add comma, add period/remove and : Not only did it synergize well with the system, but (,) unlike the soul bow, it offered immediate utility(.) (and) (U)nlike the stalwart blessing, it wouldn’t lose value with time.
λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
2024-08-06 16:40:56 +0000 UTC#46, switch he and however, add period: (Olivia hadn’t spoken on it, he, however, suspected). (Olivia hadn’t spoken on it. However, he suspected)
λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
2024-08-06 16:37:17 +0000 UTC
