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Editing Marathon: Chapter Fourteen.

Hi guys.

Here is Chapter Fourteen.

Thanks for all the help. It means a lot to me.

Regards,
BlaQQuill.

Comments

#41, comma: “Brave words (,) my child,” and here : from the crowd (,) causing

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#39, I think matters is missing : “You are here now,” His mother answered. “That is all that (matters) .”

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