Editing Marathon: Chapter Sixteen.
Added 2024-09-12 13:20:58 +0000 UTCHi guys.
Here is Chapter Sixteen.
Thanks for all the help. It means a lot to me.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
Comments
#65, : "When the next morning, he had woken up" looks better as "The next morning, when he had woken up"
λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
2024-09-13 16:55:42 +0000 UTC#61, remove comma : lines on his face(,) and a mouth
λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
2024-09-13 16:52:24 +0000 UTC
