Editing Marathon: Chapter Seventeen.
Added 2024-09-12 13:27:12 +0000 UTCHi guys.
Here is Chapter Seventeen.
Thanks for all the help. It means a lot to me.
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Comments
#40, add comma : took hold of the threetusk boar’s legs with both hands(,) and with one heave, lifted it
λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
2024-09-13 17:31:54 +0000 UTC#40, looks better if you add "but" and add commas around however : He wasn’t sure if steroids back on earth felt like this, but Greg, however, doubted it.
λɟᴉɹɒןnɓuᴉs
2024-09-13 17:29:55 +0000 UTC
