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Editing Marathon: Chapter Eighteen.

Hi guys.

Here is Chapter Eighteen.

Thanks for all the help. It means a lot to me.

Regards,
BlaQQuill.

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27, bellowed : impotently paw at the ground while they (bellow) in indignation.

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#25, remove a comma : a large concave depression about a meter wide(,) formed on the ground before them

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