My Oni Love - Chapter 3, Revised
Added 2019-02-04 21:59:32 +0000 UTCGot some advice from a friend on how to better write the chapter, and thought they made a good enough point to rewrite a little.
The rewrites start with the Haruka scenes. Basically, I just edited how they both reacted to the harem stuff.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/f2snkht39hfuryl/My%20Oni%20Love%20-%20Chapter%203%20-%20revised.pdf?dl=0
PS: Whoops, wrong link. Fixed now.
PPS: Actually fixed now. Google had it hyperlinked to the wrong spot.
Comments
Ahhhhhhh I'm so glad you like it. It's one of my favorites.
Spark
2019-02-13 20:13:52 +0000 UTCThis story is an absolute riot! I am excited to see more for sure.
Riley Sheldon
2019-02-13 19:44:19 +0000 UTCYay. :)
Spark
2019-02-04 23:44:38 +0000 UTCgreat as always!!!
emma space
2019-02-04 23:40:58 +0000 UTC
