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I didn't have that much time the past view weeks but i still want to write a comment and voice a litten bit of critique here x) i hope you got time to read it anyways. I really like the setup here and how they talk to each other. Onofre is disrespectful clearly but still shows that he needs ranach and even asking for how he felt the meeting turned out. So he doesn't underestimate ranach in this point. But what i really don't like is how the last panel turned out. Onofre is threatening ranach and while ranach looks at him, he faces another direction. It could mean many things but i will take it down on two. He underestimates ranach or his threat is an empty one. Normally - and i think onofre is that kind of dog - if you threaten someone and you really mean it, at least you look at him. Ranach could now do anything to him in the blink of an eye. So either onofre is so self-confident that he thinks he doesn't need to look at ranach, because he thinks he would win or he underestimates ranach or this is an empty threat hoping ranach will take this one seriously. But the Detail of not looking at ranach makes it - at least for me - Hot air... The reason i think that is, that if you don't trust someone you have to look at them and watch out for so-called pre-attack-indicators or a little reaction in their mimik. Or at least their reaction x) i know ranach wouldn't attack him right now but these are psychological things you cannot change that easy. We can still say onofre is still that arrogant after admitting that he got his Butt kicked by the meteros or just stupid or maybe both x) but for me, I would have liked the last panel much more if onofre faces ranach directly which he did the whole time in the pages before (for example when ranach jumped down from the rock. He didn't look directly at him but still watched him) and in this one. But in the last panel he then looks away for... some reason

Martial Cat

watch ranach probably try to sleep with him just to save his own ass xD

Moki

Ranach in last panel be like 'are you fucking real -'

Mastercat


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