Crazy Alternate Future Part 01-09
Added 2015-07-09 11:20:10 +0000 UTC"I'm pussy expert...." - Aerial Ace
Warning : This comic is alternate sequel of Crazy Future where Crazy Future is clopcomic. Normal Crazy Future can be found here => http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51002140/Crazy-Future
Character Data : http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51508160/Crazy-Future-Character-Card
Beware broken English. This comic have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be glad and fix it.
I will update this comic 2-3 page per week. Since I want to balance my time for university and another comic too. Hope you understand...
Comments
Mainly all the girls are fillyfoolers
Kankri Vantas
2015-07-15 08:44:00 +0000 UTCMy English is ok. but Raile21 and Calpain will do a better job then me so ill just help if i see something they missed which might not happen with their eagle eyes lol.
Robert Prime
2015-07-10 12:18:10 +0000 UTCeheheh that explains why she did not wanted the pact
Nocara
2015-07-09 19:53:44 +0000 UTCAwesome! Keep up the good work. The new sentence should work well with the answer you provided!
Calpain
2015-07-09 17:49:54 +0000 UTCI don't know much about English. So I think I will use that.
Vavacung
2015-07-09 17:32:11 +0000 UTCHow about something closer to what you have up there then? 'Of course! How many pussies do you think I've licked before?'
Calpain
2015-07-09 17:14:40 +0000 UTCSorry. I can't try that sentence. Cause in my rough transcript. Alternate Dawn will answer her "All of our friend, right?"
Vavacung
2015-07-09 17:10:14 +0000 UTCSome further corrections: 4th panel: Remove the 's' on seems to make it just seem. "Of course! How many pussy do you think I have ever licked before?' Try something like, 'Of course! You think this is the first pussy I've licked before?'
Calpain
2015-07-09 16:05:19 +0000 UTCFixed
Vavacung
2015-07-09 13:05:53 +0000 UTCComment: The comic is heating up. 1st panel: "Pussy on a stallion. Why does this look so hot...?" 4th Panel: "Ahhh!! Aerial... That feels good... You seems really good at this..." "Of course! How many pussy do you think I have ever licked before?"
Raile21
2015-07-09 12:43:16 +0000 UTC
