Crazy Alternate Future Part 01-28
Added 2015-09-06 17:00:47 +0000 UTC"Someday. I will make you interested in stallion like me. Fillyfooler...." - Alternate Dawn
Warning : This comic is alternate sequel of Crazy Future where Crazy Future is clopcomic. Normal Crazy Future can be found here => http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51002140/Crazy-Future
Character Data : http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51508160/Crazy-Future-Character-Card
Beware broken English. This comic have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be glad and fix it.
I will update this comic 2-3 page per week. Since I want to balance my time for life and another comic too. Hope you understand...
Comments
No interest in being a teacher, besides everyone expect an english teacher to be a native speaker.
Raile21
2015-09-09 11:24:32 +0000 UTCEver thought bout being a English teacher?
Robert Prime
2015-09-08 15:20:27 +0000 UTCIf a grammar is in a mess, unscramble them, divide them into components, separate the verbs and the subjects/nouns. The most important thing in a sentence is the verbs. Analyze the verbs, and you get the whole sentence meaning. If the verbs does not match the context, then replace it and return it with the subjects and nouns. Subjects/nouns meaning is always fixed / unchanging, but the verbs defines and can change the whole sentence, it is the soul and core of sentences.
Raile21
2015-09-08 14:52:41 +0000 UTCthank you Raile for the life of me i just could not get my head to work right trying to fix the rest of it
Robert Prime
2015-09-07 17:51:43 +0000 UTC"Thank you!!! I will never disappoint you!!" "I will try hard to make sure your satisfied with a stallion like me!! Pinkie promise!!" "How submissive you are Alternate Dawn, if only you be more aggressive in love just as you are in science... Maybe all the mares would have fallen for you."
Raile21
2015-09-07 13:11:08 +0000 UTCThank you!!! I will never disappoint you!!
Robert Prime
2015-09-07 12:45:22 +0000 UTC
