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[Event] The Adventure Logs Of Young Queen 23


Be careful with your comment. The life of young queen is in your hand now.


*Please fixing broken English for me if you have times....*

[Event] The Adventure Logs Of Young Queen 23

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You would be surprise of how many things are solved that way in computers now a days XD Flawless, or at least I cannot find any mistake to correct :)

Nocara

It's ok, dear. Everyone make a mistake. Just rest well and enjoy my work. ^^

Vavacung

guess ill let others do it the last thing i want to do is make you mad Look like my proof-reader just change the meaning of my words again...buck... blaze

Robert Prime

OH i am sorry loveless that i messed up on that edit i was tired a 12 hr shift will do that to you

Robert Prime

Whoops, looks like all of us missed that. I just corrected it as it was written. It should of course say that she flies since it landed on tails.

Drow-chan

Look like my proof-reader just change the meaning of my words again...buck...

Vavacung

Head you will walk tail you will fly. It lands on tails so why is she walking?

Prime Color Productions

Darling. Maybe you should read story before comment. Your young queen choose to walk now....

Vavacung

See if you see any lights while your flying.

Prime Color Productions

When you get on top of the hill look around.

Zeropony55

Found a wallet on the ground, because keeping bits in the ransack is a hassle.

Raile21

You start humming on a melody as you walk uphill, when you get to a vantage point/High ground to see if you spot lights in the horizon or something that can vaguely remind you of a town in he horizon. At least getting uphill might tell you if you're walking in the right direction or not.

Karma lightwing

Fillies~ keep on searchin'~ Guards~ keep on guardin'~ World~ keep on turnin'~ 'Cause it won't be too long~

Tetrominon

you get a good view from the high ground of the surrounding areas

Cylestea

Your trusty coin has chosen a ground path to the left leading to a ramp up to higher ground. Hopefully, you will be able to get a better view of distant objects from the high ground. You should be careful, though. There could be a pony patrol out this close to the border, so try to keep to any cover you can without sacrificing too much speed. And stay alert for any odd sounds, you may not be the only being using the night to travel. Perhaps if you rearrange your scarf, you could at least block your light spell to only shine forwards. Less chance of drawing attention if you can manage that.

Philip

Since you don't know which way to go, you let destiny decide it for you. You toss the coin (heads and you go right, tails you go left). The coin lands on tails. You toss the coin one more time to see how you will travel (heads and you will walk, tails you will fly). It lands on tails again so you will fly. So now you start your journey by walking to the left. This way leads up a ramp to higher ground. What do you see from the high ground?

Drow-chan

Maybe you can see the lights of a city in the distance already? It would make sense for there to be some, perhaps a fire, or street lamps. If not, try to find landmarks that you can use for orientation later. Do remember to be careful so you don't trip and fall, though.

Drow-chan

Be watchful as you travel there might be some night creatures you might want to try and eat you but keep going

UxieKnight

im to tried to think of a comment right now so everyone else have fun

Robert Prime

Sense you don't know which way to go. You let destiny decide it for you. You toss the coin (Heads go right, Tails go left). The coin landed on tails. You toss the coin one more time to see how you will travel (Heads you will walk, Tails you will fly). It landed on tails again so you will walk. So now you start your journey by walking to the left. This way leads up a ramp to higher ground. What do you see from the high ground?

Robert Prime

well may as well do this one while im still on here

Robert Prime


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