[Poll Story] Sexandroid Ending 01
Added 2018-01-12 12:34:44 +0000 UTC
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Comments
Well, I do gave them an option here. Either choose to have the Droid look like Rainbow Dash by loading last panel Or customize the appeared of the droid to new original one. This is option, this is a game of choice. And if most people choose for change. Than that is their choice. There a reason why this panel was called "Ending". Because ending mean the new beginning. And this is not the additional characters. This new droid is the same android, same mind and memory. Just appeared change. This story is about Sexandroid. It's never state that who in shipping in this story at all. And a conflict about Fluttershy having a secret crush to Rainbow Dash is still here. It's never change. Which will bring the new conflict to future story. Can she accept new appeared of Sexandroid? What about the love for Rainbow Dash. Will she satisfied just having Sexandroid or she will finally decide to pursue her dream with help from the droid?
Vavacung
2018-01-19 04:14:26 +0000 UTC...¿What was the point of choosing one of the mane six in the first place if it is going to get changed? The story was going pretty well until this point, I did not feel that it needed any additional characters.
Christopher
2018-01-18 22:41:21 +0000 UTC- This is a game. Not fiction. Not real life story. This thing was treat like Dating Simulator game. Which save and load is the important part of it! - Twilight only know that Fluttershy have Sexandroid. But she don't know 'who' is this android. - It's ok for Fluttershy to reveal that she have Sexandroid. But having 'Rainbow Droid' is not ok. Not yet. Not until she got a chance to make Rainbow Dash agree to let her have it. Before she can reveal this secret to Twilight! That why the ending said 'Truth Told Too early'. It's not the right time!
Vavacung
2018-01-16 16:26:57 +0000 UTCalso, if someone read this(but i dont think so)... its badly when story ends before its started and i know that "This is a test project I made just for fun" (c) Vavacung P.S. imho "Load the last .." not actually intresting cuz - Twilight will come and take droid any way, cuz got full information from company - ppl known about terrible risk with droid from previous panels(and droid heared about it too, if load only previous panel) - it will denine ppl choice
seaker315
2018-01-13 17:33:23 +0000 UTCafter "Invite Twilight Sparkle to join the tea party [Risk of getting caught but there is a chance to gain some information]" there was no real choice. Hm.. i thought this story based "a bit more" on good things,.. but there is hidden laws, that { main character } actually doesnt know, and voters cant get info about it cuz cant vote "read manual"/"read manual in detail", and mostly choosing actions that would do original Fluttershy would do... otherwise ther is a l.. f... incorrect info in panel 1 (who are you? was need to add some where "alternate reality/mane 6/or else, so voters would choose with less "mane 6" playing back limitations) but.. now, when.. it is now clear that its an alternate "world" and alternate "mane 6" characters.. in short, can continue without changing the selection im sure/hope/trust that (this alternate dont have much more unknown differences and) Twilight { did not lie and will do what she promised } about "that the droid will return to her with the same mind and memory" so will need to ask about how many changes will need in appearence with new law (im shure 0.1-1% should be enouth, cuz voice and behavior already different) also.. - what about twins?.. would need to get permission from bouth? or how to check which existing person was copyed if the originals looks 100% same new law must should consider this simple option - fluttershy would need help in waiting time, esp immidiatly after.. now; cuz she will thinking about suicide cases, her drone and other ponies&drones that possible can suicid/lost his "friends", cuz those droids "can be" used for sex, not "must be" used.. or ther is another .. hidden/new .. ? -with "suicid errors" fixind, fluttersy can be safe from upper future mind* problems and continue safely acting with her droid -imho, there is a high probability of psychological trauma for Fluttershy if droid would change mind and/or emotions, cuz it would actually same as death and making new person that would look like/just a copy of her previous person, and its Fluttershy (knowlage about animal death wont help much actually) -i hope Rainbow droid would in sleep mode and wont remember anything from now and till she/he&it back to fluttershy, cuz emotion processor is active and "deleting" was denied (to save from getting problems because of parting and heard from Twilight (suicid things would be fixed by company&etc, so droid wont speak about it later, and would avoid by ignoring/zero emotions reaction/etc vs those themes; otherwise emotions processor&those things will repeat result) for "load check point/last panel" - its mostly killing story interest, if used not immidiatly after "shit happens" (that happened here in panel 16 imho)
seaker315
2018-01-13 08:49:18 +0000 UTCTis the law I guess.
RozenKnight
2018-01-12 19:32:39 +0000 UTCtime for a makeover!!
Drago Whooves
2018-01-12 19:05:40 +0000 UTCI am a simple being. I hear the chance for multiple endings. I begin to try to unlock them all. I say we load the last panel.
skyshadow235
2018-01-12 16:00:36 +0000 UTCNever let in will fight till the ending or the “Happy Ending”. ; )
Orabora
2018-01-12 15:52:15 +0000 UTCSometimes the truth can hurt. But there's nothing saying Fluttershy can't go with Twilight and her new companion to get this taken care of. (Besides, being a friend should mean offering support in stressful times, and this certainly ought to qualify there.
Philip
2018-01-12 14:23:35 +0000 UTCI knew it wasn't a good idea. But they didn't (insert pony meme here).
Life Giver
2018-01-12 13:03:07 +0000 UTC
