Quest Academy: Saviours (Chapters 24, 25, 26, 27 and 28)
Added 2024-03-18 18:48:52 +0000 UTCHappy Monday Everyone.
Hope you all had a great St. Patricks Day. Sorry for the bit of a delay with these ones, but here's the next five chapters of Quest Academy. Hope you enjoy them. :)
I've been having a good bit of fun with the Scavenger Run, and we'll be wrapping it up soon.
As always, thanks so much for the comments and messages. I'm happy with the direction of the story and where we're going.
Brian
Comments
So Im rereading and saw something in chapte 25. It's probably late for comments but fuck it. Sal could have used the flash/bolt ability. He knows it and could run to the far end of the zone while Darren carried Blathaid. This chapter really feels like it's building up other characters and I like that Sal's not showing off. At the same time maybe in the future Sal can switch between the speedster skill and the later Perfect skill while on a Scavenger run. Maybe swapping between skills quickly would be a good training experience.
Chris Hoopes
2024-06-26 23:00:39 +0000 UTCIn Chapter 28 it looks like you left in a note where it says "*Insert Table for Glock 17*"
Kerradeph
2024-04-06 03:14:41 +0000 UTCBut for some reason I also find it kinda interesting if smth developed between Sal and Erica
Reshi47
2024-03-26 19:55:06 +0000 UTCAny news on when chapter 29 is coming out? I'm not even talking about a whole batch, I just kinda need that fix lol and even one chapter might do it
Davi(d)
2024-03-26 18:17:28 +0000 UTCI would love that as well !
Reshi47
2024-03-21 00:28:07 +0000 UTCThese were a fun batch to read, the pick-me-up I didn’t know I needed lol (work amirite) looking forward to the next
Mark
2024-03-19 21:49:08 +0000 UTCWant to see some Sal/ Divinity romance
Ron Blondeau
2024-03-19 17:38:07 +0000 UTCsorry 42
Robyn Davis
2024-03-19 04:06:05 +0000 UTCChapter 24 refers to Blathnaid as Ms Clean rather than McClean and Chapter 27 refers to Salvatore having 32 gates opened rather than 43.
Robyn Davis
2024-03-19 04:05:37 +0000 UTCGreat catch. Edited that out on the manuscript side :)
James Northman
2024-03-19 03:33:04 +0000 UTCGreat chapters, great to see Sal interacting with his friends a bit more, can't wait for Divinity to finally come back so they can talk as well and for Sal and Blathnaid to use their loot in crafting!
Davi(d)
2024-03-18 23:40:22 +0000 UTCI must agree, nice chapters
Alteron
2024-03-18 20:34:15 +0000 UTCI just looked him up. His book: Master of the Hoard looks interesting.
Oscar Thomsen
2024-03-18 20:14:52 +0000 UTCAh, my friend Lars Machmuller is from there. Really fun Danish author. I worked for Zendesk too and got to visit Copenhagen, and really liked it. :)
James Northman
2024-03-18 19:57:06 +0000 UTCLoot goblins to the rescue
Rapsten
2024-03-18 19:45:53 +0000 UTCGreat set of chapters. In chapter 28 the reminder to add the table is still there and it should probably mentioned that they found the gun when they give Darren the report on what they found, it is a premium piece of loot after all.
ShadowOfHavoc
2024-03-18 19:37:28 +0000 UTCFair question, but unexpected reply… Denmark 🇩🇰 I need at least 3 hours of reading time before i can sleep 💤
Oscar Thomsen
2024-03-18 19:23:47 +0000 UTCI now need to ask where in the world you are, because it's only coming up to 7pm in Ireland. :D
James Northman
2024-03-18 18:53:56 +0000 UTCPerfect timing for my night time reading! You’re the best!
Oscar Thomsen
2024-03-18 18:51:04 +0000 UTC
