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Quest Academy: Saviours (Chapters 49, 50, 51, 52, 53 and 54)

Hey Everyone,

Sickness is gone, and I'm finally able to sleep better. I've been working hard on these chapters, and trying to get ahead of myself again. Here's the next batch and it takes us to an exciting development that I'll be curious to hear your thoughts on.

Also, I'm aware that I'm possibly the most long-winded author in existence. I will eventually get to the Tower, I promise. :D

Anyways, wanted to say thank you to everyone that has been supporting me and sending comments and messages of support. Really appreciate you all. As always, let me know what you think of the chapters!

Brian

Comments

So after rereading chapter 53. And comparing to chapter 46s price chart I have a question. Quest says that hundreds of students are able to take "Condition" as an ability. Hundreds. I'm guessing that's somewhere between 200 and say 700 viable compatibilities. Chapter 46 shows "New Skill Weaves Created" to be worth 1,400 Q-Cred. Are we talking one pay out or per viable compatability? Looks like that 1400 is based off 200 Q-cred per viability. I mean it sounds like a 80,000 to 140,000 Q-Cred payout to me. That's not even counting the other weaves he created. It would be nice to have some clearer prices listed in chapter 46. It seems like there is supposed to be a base payment for grade improvements/ discoveries and a bonus per student who can use the new weaves but the info is a little confusing. I'd imagine alot of LitRPG nerds would love seeing those numbers. Myself included.

Chris Hoopes

Ok now we’re cooking!!!!

Abhishek

Will we finally see the ridiculous synergy that leads to the OP MC?

Maakolo

you can't leave me like this. Thank you so much. fun to read

Umbra

He was told about Grant in the first chapter of this current book

Dale Medford

Sal could take the grant skill and use it himself or perfect it. He could give Anna a temp use of the void skill with the grant skill. He could give others a temporary use of this new skill with grant.

Dale Medford

Just wanted to say I enjoy this series.

Dawn Zeleznik

Because he didn’t even know Grant existed? It is interesting Quest is only now introducing them.

Andrew Tobin

Just caught up and I love the direction your taking the characters.

Michelle Ray

Ok, I think Brophy will get the skill implant and turn willingly villant. That way there is a tangible bad guy with history. It would also teach the academy not to make just any people stronger. At the same time, I don't want Erika to be the misunderstood hero though (as from Sal's vision/clear moment), so my vote would be that she stays a bitch (not all characters need to/should be redeemed after all) and that she becomes the controller that nobody wants to work with. And/Or she goes to work with Doc Ameye since they do seem alike^^

Nina Speicher

These chapters are great Brian. Thank you.

Ron Blondeau

First off I hate you with that cliffhanger. Second I love the direction this is going and I'll be incredibly sad if Sal doesn't take this as he implanted skill for the saviours

Michael Dunsdon

Because quest told him not to. Sal was told he couldn't use it on people until he met conditions set out by quest to make sure Sal didn't accidentally hurt people since messing with weaves can do that

Michael Dunsdon

Great chapters

Alteron

I'm not sure if I should hate you or not for that cliffhanger

Tom

Great set of chapters. It seems a little odd that Prestige calls Gallant “Brophy”, when that’s their last name.

Lindenshield

Is there an elephant in the room? Why has Sal not used skill master on Grant? If his skill is lower level, would a higher level allow him to make it permanent? Or have a longer use of skill granted.....

Dale Medford

Love the story! Not sure if this is helpful but Chapter 53 top of page 2 you have Prestige entering the class room with Quest. But then she enters again through a gate? I’m so torn on where I’d like to see the story go. So many possibilities. This must be what Divinity feels like looking at the forest of futures.

Lisa Johnson

holy shit what a great set of chapters I love this direction

SMILL3Y

54's ending was great! poor divinity is going to get a headache because of the crazy futures that just were enabled by this one skill. But hey at least Sal now has a skill he can integrate with himself once he is in the saviors....also with this one skill I feel like he just saved like a billions so kinda earned that ttitle already like divinity

Travis Nevins

Just read 50...and daaaamn Barry slaps hard when he wants to.

Travis Nevins

Incredible Chapters!!! This sounds absolutely perfect for Sal and can truly make him into a monster. The skill is vague enough that it can apply to anything from his gates, his body to even decision making

b bor

Wow. Those were some great chapters! Thanks.

Tim Walloch

Damn cliffhangers… keep’em up! Great chapters !

Jeremy

I am guessing that thus will fix his eyes issue

gideon ferrier

In Chapter 50, you state that Prowler Blood is a byproduct for elixirs. I believe you mean to say it is an ingredient (a substance combined in a mixture to create a particular dish or product) or a catalyst (something that enhances the rate of a reaction without reacting itself). A byproduct would be a useful, but unintended secondary product. For example, if you were to have a process in which you combine prowler blood with shredded leecher vine and powdered voider hide, bring to a boil, infuse with essence, and then strain into a vial, the intended elixer that helps your essence passively absorb sound and boost stealth would be the product, and if the strained particulates could be put to use (as a poison for incorporeal entities, or to inhibit essence manipulation), then that would be a byproduct.

Ben Cooper

Perfect might help maximise the space, having space for multiple abilities beyond it would be something I can see it doing over time

Thomas Todd

I’m not sure if he’ll implant it. There hasn’t been a lot of debate of maximum space allotment so I could see him using it to only maximize any skill he implants.. But I expect to see it implanted

Rapsten

This is a very good point.

James Northman

You have Prestige walking towards them with Quest, Upgrade, and Grant in Ch 53... but then she comes through the teleportation gate.

Dutch Palmer

Second that. That ability is asking to be implanted

ShadyDemoness

Those chapters were absolutely amazing, Sal needs to implant that weave ASAP. Barring that keep it active all the time He also needs to combine it with Skill Master as soon as he's got the chance, if it makes it so he can use any ability he takes perfectly and if he uses it long enough or something it becomes permanent like an imprint he will be unstoppable

Thomas Todd

Nice! Been looking forward to these chapters ✅

Oscar Thomsen

Book 1 was 86, Book 2 was 83, so my best guess would be somewhere in the 80's.

James Northman

Any idea on the expected number of chapters? Or is that more of a moving target?

Dutch Palmer


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