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Poem ASMR: The type of lover I need

i need someone

who knows struggle

as well as i do

someone

willing to hold my feet in their lap

on days it is too difficult to stand

the type of person who gives

exactly what i need

before i even know i need it

the type of lover who hears me

even when i do not speak

is the type of understanding

i demand

Comments

Omg RIGHT??

Andie

Oooooh your voice is deeper with english.... ๐Ÿฆ‹ First I can't focus on the poem because of your voice. I had to listen several times ๐Ÿ˜Œ

I replayed it a couple of times.. I really like this one ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿค•

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You did so so well, Will. I'm so in awe of people who are able to speak more than one language, and who strive to add inflection and emotion into it. Poetry is hard in your own language, so for you to recite this in English and to do it so well, it's incredible. There was only really one sentence I could see that you could have changed where you paused, but overall I was so inspired listening to this. I'm very proud of you, and you should be too. ๐Ÿ’›

Megan

"willing to hold my feet in their lap on days it is too difficult to stand" Ooohh~ did you write this? This is such a great line! ๐Ÿ˜ฏ (Maybe it's the line breaks, but I thought this was a Rupi Kaur poem at first LOL) ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ

Andie

Tbh I read the poem itself without your voice first. I liked the meaning of it but it didn't make me think deeper somehow..? So actually when I heard you reading it, I enjoyed the poem way more! Your pauses made me think about how you might have interpreted the poem.. I actually really loved that and thought it was very interesting! ๐Ÿ˜ฏ Thank you so much, Will ๐Ÿ‘ I'm looking forward to the next one already! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿซ‚ PS: If the type of lover you need is like the one described in the poem it must be a very beautiful person.

๐Ÿฅบ this was really cute~ The poem and your voice where lovely ๐Ÿฅฐ you did very well. I hope youโ€™ll keep trying more like this and youโ€™ll get the hang of it in no time. ๐Ÿค—

I love it! It's really nice to hear you reading poems in English, Will! ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ’› And really sweet of you to try something like this for us ~ ๐Ÿฅบ The rhythm is a tiny bit off but you still did really well!! Next time will be even better!!


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