Merry Christmas!

Hey Wolf, I'm glad you wrote back. I saw you dropped a comment yesterday and sometimes Patreon deletes longer comments. Dont worry about the financial support--feedback suites me just fine. I agree with you on the choices. It's one thing that I"ve struggled with. When writing games like this, choices end up branching things out. In some regards, it can get difficult to organize all of those choices and branches and then bring them back together. For me, I've always wanted to tell a specific story, but I wanted a couple different ways of getting there. The choices can also impact the mood at the time and customize that to the player. Basically, I still plan on doing a revamp of the entire game when I'm done so things will look better and more consistent throughout the game. Hopefully, with that will come more choices. Another obstacle to this now is that I release the game in chapters and episodes. It becomes difficult to have those choices become significantly meaningful over updates. However, if you're completely crazy and go back through the game from the beginning, you may notice things are more consistent and that some of your choices in the begining do alter conversations slightly later on. It's sublte right now but I plan for improvements.

Aaryn

Hello, first of all Meryy Christmas and happy new Year! I have played your game and I've loved it! I've played a lot of gay visual novel but for me yours even if it is your best is the best I've ever played! The reason I'm writting this is because I want to let you know how much of good job you've done in your game and how good it is but also because I can't support you throught money, sadly, I decided to write this to give you feedback and some things and ideas t make the game even better! So first of I think if you could make more decisions for the player because there are some momments where you want to choose the action of the character(Zach) but you don't have an option also there are moments tht something feels forced to happen , example:(spoiler) Zach having a crush on Braden or kissing him but there are momments where there is a so big time between choices where I don't know but others but I feel I can't choose what I say for the simpliest. Ah it would also be cool if being with Braden would be harder but not like imposible and even being able to fail or completly reject him or like a bad ending. Well sometimes when the days roll some actions feel forced and not having a choice to do something else like going in the doctor with Braden not having a choice to go alone. But there are momments where dialog repeats it self in the daily what to do with Braden and it kinda makes the player a bit bored. Also I would L O V E if there could be a Mikhail route because I don't know i just love his character he is really cute and handsome! So this ends it, and I ain't sure if this is really feedback but I think it is mostly stuff that could be impoved and added and I know the game is not finished so some of this may be things that are like that because the game is not fully finished! I support you to full to continue your amazing job with this game and thank you for making this game and for reading this huge paragraph I've written . (Also sorry if there are any grammar errors, please excuse my English it ain't my first language)

P.S. Be careful when you do this, if you do it more than one time, it will indeed take your money more than one time

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A solution to this like I have done is to change pledge your amount that you want to pledge. Then if you are on pc, maybe mobile too im not sure. Go to payment methods, It should say however many memberships you have and it may or may not say declined since it wont bill normally until the next month. There should either be a "retry" button or an "update" button. This should pledge your amount instantly and take the money off of the card.

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