S3 E02 Asking the Important Questions
Added 2022-11-03 12:00:06 +0000 UTCBecause Caroline knows what the real priority is here, thanks!
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Welcome! As you’re probably finding out, you don’t actually get the answer right away and everyone is going to hate me, it is delicious 🤣
Jill Bearup
2022-11-11 15:23:25 +0000 UTCSeeing this on YT was why I signed up for the Patreon. I can't survive the cliffhanger.
Vikki Taggart
2022-11-11 15:19:23 +0000 UTCWhen that video looped, the answer to “will you marry me?” became “Leo looks you square in the eyes: ‘No…’ “
Giles Holtby
2022-11-07 01:10:07 +0000 UTCI CAN NOT imagine Captain Leo Collins's facial expression right now, but I'd certainly like to!😂
Marea G.
2022-11-05 06:04:16 +0000 UTCI’m sure this ✨minor detail✨ is written down somewhere…
Jill Bearup
2022-11-04 12:32:14 +0000 UTC"Are you going to tell me who killed husband?" "No." "Why not?" "Because the writer hasn't figured it out yet. She knows that *I* know, but she doesn't know."
Anders
2022-11-04 11:54:27 +0000 UTCWonderful example of The Writing Process - when the protagonist and plot refuse to follow the premeditated outline. I made a point of taking my laptop over to a friend's house just so I could show them The Story Thusfar with my Patreon login (FYI - I don't have any Google account so I can't be a YouTube subscriber. Call me a cyber-hermit. Or perhaps Curmudgeon). I think they'll be breathlessly waiting for The Further Adventures.
Val Wann
2022-11-04 04:25:10 +0000 UTCSomeone already said it, but the loop timing was brilliant. Tell us you did it on purpose.
Brice Moss
2022-11-04 03:56:48 +0000 UTC😊
Jill Bearup
2022-11-03 19:15:05 +0000 UTCAw, thank you!
Jill Bearup
2022-11-03 19:14:58 +0000 UTCWelcome!
Jill Bearup
2022-11-03 19:14:21 +0000 UTCOoh. Joined the Patreon just so I wouldn't have to wait for these releases!
Cheyenne
2022-11-03 18:27:44 +0000 UTCI am going to feel a tangible sense of loss when this story is complete and I have no more episodes to look forward to... Thank you for these.
Jim Sanderson
2022-11-03 14:10:26 +0000 UTCI am so *invested* at this point. ❤
Shannon Sorohan
2022-11-03 13:37:35 +0000 UTCGASP!!!
CTgraphy
2022-11-03 13:37:21 +0000 UTCWHAT A TWIST!
Kalcheus
2022-11-03 13:33:52 +0000 UTCNice cliffhanger.
Jerry
2022-11-03 12:50:14 +0000 UTCI had the same "What just happened?" when the short looped! Brilliant, Jill!!!
Ann Brookens
2022-11-03 12:36:46 +0000 UTCI don't want to say that episode 3 isn't going to help but...I am going to say that when Caroline becomes the one asking 'why are you doing that?' then we might just be in trouble...
Jill Bearup
2022-11-03 12:32:24 +0000 UTCMWAHAHAHA (that was an accident)
Jill Bearup
2022-11-03 12:15:09 +0000 UTCReally good cutting between the end and start of that loop ... It took a moment before I realized that it had started over again and did not, in fact, answer the question at the end of the short. 😆
GumUlf
2022-11-03 12:07:17 +0000 UTCNeed. Want. Tomato, tomato?
Aguido Horatio Davis
2022-11-03 12:05:09 +0000 UTC... But ... but ... the whole S2 ending re-write was so Hot Childhood Friend could >be< there. There has to be >some< 'additional complication'. I need E03 right now!
Ekij
2022-11-03 12:04:44 +0000 UTCFirst squee!
Aguido Horatio Davis
2022-11-03 12:00:34 +0000 UTC
