B2 – Chapter 25
Added 2024-09-26 13:48:29 +0000 UTC1
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Thanks for the chapter! Hrm... Stellas is a bit too hungry for new knowledge... and seems to be concerningly lacking in morals/ethics, given her whole suggestion of just forcing everyone on Earth to obey Lyn via mind magic. That hero artifact that Cecily used feels... overly powerful. I mean, yes, it leaves the user paralyzed for a time, and it's no good for long term mental manipulation, but it's effectively a guaranteed way to kill one's enemies given that it leaves the target(s) in a vegetable state after the hour time limit is up (never mind that she could just order said target(s) to kill themselves). Kind of makes me wonder why she never used it on the Demonic Dragon, or James back when she was watching James and Kory fight. The only thing I can think of is that she didn't want to be helpless around the other heroes during the fight with the Demonic Dragon and have them take the artifact away from her or some such, and she didn't feel that she had a sufficient hold over the minds of the Valagonians back when James and Kory fought. I was also kind of hoping that Lyn actively locking the reincarnation doors and trying to destroy Cecily's soul would've prevented Cecily from successfully reviving, but... I guess that would've been too easy.
Jailed Cinder
2024-11-17 17:02:01 +0000 UTCOoo, now Stellas is pointing out how similar Lyn is to Cecily. There's a pattern forming here that rebuffs some of my previous criticism. But I do feel like it took a bit too long for a character to point out Lyn’s flaws and similarity to Cecily.
Foxner
2024-10-16 05:36:15 +0000 UTCIs thomas translating nouns to equivalents as he speaks about Earth?
Sean Hibbitt
2024-10-08 11:33:26 +0000 UTCI meant Royal road comments not reddit XD Good lord the brain rot is hitting me. I may have to be like the author S.C. King and become a digital hermit for 2 months to crank out a story.
Seras Streams
2024-09-26 15:13:22 +0000 UTCI will blame this on Thomas’s poor education in a rural countryside school with a crappy series of teachers who didn’t know better - and not an author slip. (It was totally an author slip. I’ll fix)
Seras Streams
2024-09-26 15:11:49 +0000 UTCPlease don't call europe a country lmao, it's a continent
Colonel Doloryas
2024-09-26 15:10:54 +0000 UTCOne thing I find amusing is how most Yankee characters have an utter defeatist world view because they assume that the lies the Alarmist USA media companies spew are true (3 men make a tiger they say)
Gabriel Melnik
2024-09-26 14:31:44 +0000 UTCPoor Reddit rewards, from Happy seal on dark threads to gold upvotes.
Cosmoros Subs
2024-09-26 14:17:35 +0000 UTCI have no potato to give like on Reddit. :(
Seras Streams
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