Sketchs for the second act- Part 2
Added 2015-06-19 15:36:48 +0000 UTCHello! Alright! I see you guys really Liked Lima and Bali. Penny is alright, a bit cliché, but I can work that idea a little more. Masara, some liked others found a little distant to the original character. I made another version, something between a priestess and a nun. I want someone to make her look somewhat evolved and superior. And a did a sketch for a super-Mack. Since her biotic powers are so powerful and stuff, I come with this super hero/sayajin version. No hair, and with more tatoos on her face and body. And I can make some effects in the animation, like sparks and energy waves pulsing from her body. Well, I think it will be something cool to try. And there is Minerva. I am not completely happy with the two concepts I did. One looks pretty... meh and the other looks like Kraven the hunter. On the second act she faces her father and takes his place on... whatever he does. So she's a pretty big shot now and wants Shepherd to be her employee/pet. I was thinking in something like a executive, but powerful, and sexy. And a bit slutty. That's hard.
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They are not? I thought that cause of those scars on her arms. Were they supposed to be something else like another color? It's just a sketch so idk.
Pixelpapst
2015-06-22 12:55:00 +0000 UTCI will what I can do. The cloths can be ripped on the arms area.
ReddyHeart
2015-06-22 12:21:21 +0000 UTCAbout Mack, I want the energy to run through her body, I will make her after Liara. I will post samples of that effect as soon I get it working.
ReddyHeart
2015-06-22 12:19:53 +0000 UTCBut I have to admit that I really like her ripped clothes. Looks really good and give me the imagination that it has to be really tight.
Pixelpapst
2015-06-21 22:40:49 +0000 UTCIndeed, with sunglasses eye makeup becomes useless.
CJoe
2015-06-21 21:54:23 +0000 UTCYeah I think the shades are much better than makeup. They give much more of an air of bossiness. Having makeup as well might be a bit too much.
The Alternate202
2015-06-21 15:41:17 +0000 UTCThat's right so we have to choose wisely
Pixelpapst
2015-06-21 12:26:59 +0000 UTCThanks! Yes! Baroness is the perfect model I am looking for!
ReddyHeart
2015-06-21 12:18:38 +0000 UTCI don't know. I wanted her to use some glasses or shades. We can have both, shades and makeup, but they kinda kills eachother,
ReddyHeart
2015-06-21 12:17:37 +0000 UTCThank you for the response! The trouble with Minerva's outfits I found its they aren't sexy enough. I mean, the original character is hot as hell. She must be the hotter as possible. I am still trying.
ReddyHeart
2015-06-21 12:14:15 +0000 UTCxD fatale makeup
Pixelpapst
2015-06-21 09:27:48 +0000 UTCI forgot. The way the energy is flowing out of Mak's body is just right. It has a really nice watery effect and is not just a simple halo. It would be nice if you could keep it that way.
CJoe
2015-06-21 09:15:09 +0000 UTCSome makeup could indeed add this naughty aspect Reddyheart is looking for. I googled "Femme fatale makeup" and found a lot of examples ^^
CJoe
2015-06-21 08:26:17 +0000 UTCMy thoughts on Mack and Minerva: Mack I think looks really great. The whole 'super-powered-up biotic punk badass with hints of Dragonball Z' is the perfect approach to take with her I think, and could look really cool with those energy effects if you can get them working well. Excellent job. As for Minerva's two designs, I definitely prefer the first one over the "Kraven the Hunter"-type one. That one seems a bit 'out there'. :p It looks like you're on the right track with the first one, as it certainly has more of a "super-powered boss" look to it (the shades definitely help with that I think), though it sounds like you're not too happy with it yourself. Still, I think that one looks closer to what you're going for than the second design, so hopefully you're able to come up with something that's even closer to what you want. Either way, it's certainly a good start!
The Alternate202
2015-06-21 04:18:09 +0000 UTCMaybe Minerva could wear some makeup. <a href="http://sluttygirlproblems.com/health-and-beauty/five-ways-to-party-proof-your-make-up/" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://sluttygirlproblems.com/health-and-beauty/five-ways-to-party-proof-your-make-up/</a>
Pixelpapst
2015-06-20 23:18:40 +0000 UTCOh yeah Mack will be awesome with those leaking biotic powers of her. If I could decide I would choose Baroness.
Pixelpapst
2015-06-20 23:02:48 +0000 UTCI really like Mak v2.0. I'm not into tatoos, but it goes perfectly with the character. For Minerva, I was browsing different references, and found these ladies who could fit your description (executive, powerful and sexy) : Kei Yuki 2013 (Captain Harlock) and Baronness (Cobra).
CJoe
2015-06-20 21:53:52 +0000 UTCWhen you say it has to be funny than I would choose Minerva ACT2 Vers2 xD
Pixelpapst
2015-06-20 12:17:29 +0000 UTCThank you for the reply! I didn't came with an especific idea for Penny's gun, but the heavy machine gun would be more funnier, and more cliché. About the armor plate, yeah, the cerberus one would make more sense. Did you like which version of Masara? The dancer or the nun? I don't find that too interesting for Minerva, its a party dress. I am looking for something functional. And sexy. And a bit slutish. But Bali is an admiral now, she even have a fleet. The tip of her head is an imitation of a officer cap.
ReddyHeart
2015-06-20 12:09:18 +0000 UTCWhy I mentioned that Penny looks to odd is because this appereance doesn't fit her personality and even not the ME universe. It would fit more into the gallery section of the game. I would say if she needs a dangerous gun than one out of the ME universe. Maybe the Geth Spitfire? <a href="http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Geth_Spitfire" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Geth_Spitfire</a> And then she won't hold it two handed cause she is a strong girl xD Instead of the band I would give her a complete different armor. What about a Krogan or a Ceberus Armor? <a href="http://bestgamewallpapers.com/files/mass-effect-3/cerberus-trooper_wide.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://bestgamewallpapers.com/files/mass-effect-3/cerberus-trooper_wide.jpg</a> I would guess she will fit in those armor quite nicely. While holding the Spitfire in one hand she could hold the helmet between her other arm. A sketch would now be interesting. I was just brainstorming a bit. Tell me what you guys think. Your idea about Mack is outstanding. This one is gonna be so awesome!!! Lima and Masara. I would not change them. For Minerva what about this dress: <a href="https://sarahtherebel.files.wordpress.com/2013/03/mass-effect-3-citadel-dlc-610x340.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://sarahtherebel.files.wordpress.com/2013/03/mass-effect-3-citadel-dlc-610x340.jpg</a> <a href="https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/b1/c7/45/b1c745439882b681ea67451ce184d679.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/b1/c7/45/b1c745439882b681ea67451ce184d679.jpg</a> Also a sketch would be nice when possible. Bali's outfit. Currently I have no idea. Looks like she now wants to help even more and put on the admiral outfit.
Pixelpapst
2015-06-19 17:02:31 +0000 UTC
