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Animation sample of Mack for the second act

This is just a sample. I am inserting the graphics of Mack in the game. This is the normal stance.


I did these energy effects. I wanted to do something small, i don't want to cover her body with a blue glow or something like that. It would make harder to check her muscles. It's on the initial stage yet, I need to make the facial animations and some tweeks here and there.


Tell me what you think about it.


UPDATE- I did make a new version, a bit more "oomph" here and there. And I added some red shocks in her body.

Animation sample of Mack for the second act

Comments

I will give a look into this. The support right now is pretty awesome already.

ReddyHeart

Oh man that's awesome! You should plug your game somewhere! I Saw it accidently on my friend's favourite feed, more people should support this!

Vladdy Bladdy

Yes, I am planning an alternate version of the game with dickgirls. I have to make changes in the text and in the graphics, of course. I think it will not that hard to do.

ReddyHeart

Nice nice! How there's going to be a dickgirl variant too!

Vladdy Bladdy

Yeah, I think they are too fast too. I think it needs a bit more of momentum. And putting some energy spark when she clenchs the fist is a very nice idea! Consider it done!

ReddyHeart

Wow it's posted so long ago and I haven't comment it yet. I like the blue heat lines coming out of her body. It looks really good and the idea is nice too. But it would be interesting to see how it would look like when you slow down the animation of the blue heat lines. They are a bit fast in my opinion. It would give you more room to accelerate her enegy output later. Maybe when she has her groth spurt when her energy output rises like in Dragonball or you have some special ideas. Also the red energy lightning. How about to time them when she clenched her fists? Like a little power spike.

Pixelpapst

With these eyes and this body, she looks like a female version of broly from Dragon Ball Z and this is great :-D

Cyberphoenix89

Just had a look at the second version. I like that that the new energy effects are different than the first ones, both in colour and in how they look a bit more like electricity and spark in and out quickly. It adds yet another nice aspect to the overall effect, and makes it so that you can see both, rather than it being hard to tell the difference as it might have been if they were the same colour. Plus of course the extra movement looks really good too, and I agree with what CJoe said about having her head move down slightly making her look even more powerful and intimidating. It's a subtle change but it has a good affect. Great work, it looks like it's coming along very nicely!

The Alternate202

The bouncing effect on sampleMack2.swf is a nice addition :) Making her traps move higher (or her head going down) gives a stronger feeling of tension. The 2nd sample looks much more dynamic, probably because of the two points mentioned above and also because of the zoom in you made. Nice job.

CJoe

Yeah, her head could use more transictions. I will work on that after making the face animation.

ReddyHeart

Good points, I didn't give much thought where the spark should happen. But I will improve these effects yet, i am not totally happy with them.

ReddyHeart

Her growth sequence will be something like that. And something close to Dragon Ball Z too. But I will make shots of other angles.

ReddyHeart

Indeed! I did a new version, I added movement on the strings, now the bra can expand more.

ReddyHeart

She will grow more on the end of the event.

ReddyHeart

Looks cool! I like that you've made the effect look kind of like heat boiling off of her body, it really adds to the feeling that her muscles are full of huge amounts of strength and power now. And as you say, you don't want to have too many of them so that they cover up her muscles, but you've got enough that it's a proper effect and not just a random spark here and there. It looks different than I imagined when you first said about it, but that's good, because this looks better! The only thing I can think so say is that maybe there could be just one or too less energy lines on her shoulders just in the last couple of frames as the energy is sort of "dispersing" at the end of the animation cycle, as that looks like the only area where there are so many effects there that they might be a bit distracting. But that's it. It's a really nice effect, and certainly adds an extra level of coolness to Act 2 Mack!

The Alternate202

I love this stance animation, it's smooth, and makes her as intimidating as a bomb about to blow. The animation of her power flowing out of her body is great, but looks a bit more like electricity on her left leg. And maybe a few more transitions for her head tilting would make it less "creepy", though it could fit a mentally unstable character like her. ^^

CJoe

Excellent. Could even be a growth sequence, breathe, hold that, breathe, bigger and hold that, over and over. She would be huge in no time.

Nice. Her bra seems a little too static tho.

Alex Krycek

intimidating, I like it!

camel

Is she growing?:P Looks like the electricity around her is making her grow more!:3

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