Masara's main graphic sketch for act 2

I like the gears like shoulder pads. Maybe a more Stempunk all around look could be interesting The suit clips could look like bolt heads and little things like that.

CJoe

Thanks for the review. I did another sketch for the head. Check it out.

ReddyHeart

Got it. Check the next post, there is a cleaner version there.

ReddyHeart

Looks big and imposing so that's great and sexy, not sure about the gears though.

X42

Looks very cool! I like the superhero-ish look of the costume, and the ornate, almost jewelry-like parts, too. It's hard to think of any suggestions/ideas to give. Some people have already said about giving her pupils, so I guess that's one (especially as Mack already has no pupils). :p Looking back at one of your previous sketches of her (with colour), the outfits look fairly similar except for the face/head area, so only thing I can think is that maybe that's the main area you're not entirely happy with, and to possible try some different looks there? It's hard to say, it does seem like a trickier design than some of the previous girls. Still, like camel said, if you can come up with a better design and one that you're happier with, I'm sure we'd all love to see it!

The Alternate202

HA! I get you, she really looks like a giant robot. I tjink she may look better from another angle.

ReddyHeart

I didn't plan to make energy sparks for her. Maybe a different type of effect, like a energy aura, force field.

ReddyHeart

Sure, I can post some samples of Mack with pupils. I believe I will release the second and third part of Sacrifice in this year yet.

ReddyHeart

True.

ReddyHeart

Thought #2, be careful that you don't make her look too much like Big-O.

She looks big, very tough and somewhat mechanical. Please keep her pupils, I think blanked out eyes are creepy, even for Little Orphan Annie.

Due to the missing pupils it looks like she got overhelmed by her new upcoming biotic power. I like it because this shows how powerful her biotic abilities are. Except for Jack who is a biotic monster she wouldn't need biotic heat waves, or? It can also show in which way the more powerful biotic has affected her body. She looks like a guardian xD I really like her. When I would play ME3 again she will always protect me :3

Pixelpapst

I like her costume ;) shows a nice amount of open boob :D Giving her Pupils will look nicer, I wish you gave mack pupils, I know that kinda her god mode look, but i think they all will look sexier with pupils. ;) Great job keep it up :) and hoping to see a few comics this year still from you too ;p

kidmanga

hmm. looks nice but if you have a better idea i'd like to see it

camel

Size is great, though I like her eyes having pupils. More expressive that way.

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