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Minerva's main graphic ACT 2

Hello!

This is the finished version of Minerva. I used some symbols of her original outfit into her arms. Now she looks kinda a futuristic WW2 dominatrix, which isn't that bad(wink wink). I guess.


I think she could use more props/acessories, maybe the idea of red scarf wasn't so bad after all.


What do you think about her breasts? Too much?

Minerva's main graphic ACT 2

Comments

A pistol could be a nice addition indeed.

CJoe

That's is the main reason because i didn't add the scarf in the end. And a more elabored belt/navel is a better idea, make it bigger and with something interesting on it. Maybe a pistol?

ReddyHeart

For the breasts I answered on your last post (#3), but for the scarf...It would hide these nice muscular neck and traps. As for accessories, her outfit doesn't let much place to place some. But how about a gem in her navel.

CJoe

Um...glasses are technically acessory too.....just saying

Dalpy

She doesn't have a reason to use regular glasses. And a shade/visor is an acessory.

ReddyHeart

I agree, every girl needs an special trait. But Minerva was "built" to be a perfect human, so in theory she wouldn't have a physical weakness. Maybe her buck teeth as a flaw.

ReddyHeart

she is awsome <3 but..i think her breast are slighlty too big ^^'

Corentin Broquet

As i say great work but definately try an even bigger bust, i think each girl should have a uniques physical trait which sets her apart, biggest biceps, thighs, breast etc. Plus the main charatcer should remain male as it works best with your story

davyd chapman-comb

Thanks again!

ReddyHeart

Thanks!

ReddyHeart

1- I need to fix that, i can't believe I passed that. 2-The legs are long, but she could use thicker legs. I wanted to give her a brutish look, a bigger upper body. 3-Sure, let me see what I can do.

ReddyHeart

...can't you do just regular glasses? <a href="http://img10.deviantart.net/6f6d/i/2013/318/8/0/miranda_9_by_notsodamndeviant-d6u8a8r.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://img10.deviantart.net/6f6d/i/2013/318/8/0/miranda_9_by_notsodamndeviant-d6u8a8r.jpg</a> These ones look like the ones from Frank Miller's futuristic Batman... <a href="https://epeelegendaire.files.wordpress.com/2013/01/dark-knight-returns-2.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://epeelegendaire.files.wordpress.com/2013/01/dark-knight-returns-2.jpg</a>

Dalpy

I agree too. I gonna check it out.

ReddyHeart

True. Maybe I should adjust her body better.

ReddyHeart

Well, I need to make something for her face. Her hair can't be changed, the shades are a better option. After all, she is a shady girl. And i like girls with glasses.

ReddyHeart

I agree.

ReddyHeart

Thanks!

ReddyHeart

I feel you. I will make some experiments with the sizes and I will post them.

ReddyHeart

Yeah, she must have a big ass. In her muscle burst sequence I will give a special attention to them.

ReddyHeart

In the moment I am just picking some places in the ship. The navigation system will not be implemented. As for the graphics, I am using some scenes of the original game as placeholders. I plan to redraw them. The tough part is to find an art style which merges with the graphics of the girls. Or are you just asking about her room? She will be in her office.

ReddyHeart

I think the size of her breasts is great, because the rest of her is so big as well! They're fitting for her crazy-huge proportions, to the point where she might almost look a bit "off" if they were any smaller. I say it every time, but the full colours and shading look awesome. I love that she really does look like a super-muscular version of herself. Extremely large and definitely in charge! You came up with a really great design for sure!

The Alternate202

Awesome. The additional symbols look really good. WIth a girl like this you can sell all your pillows at home :D She looks so nice man :3 In other words perfect like Cerberus said ^^

Pixelpapst

What are your consepts for the environments/ rooms?

David

Love the size of the breasts. Gotta say, I think her arse should be big too, has she does have a great bum in the game.

X42

Just a bit. Shrink them just a bit to showcase her musculature.

tropetweeter

Amazing as think her breasts could be even bigger

davyd chapman-comb

She's perfect. Excellent!

Still dont get the glasses, but the breasts are good, maybe just a tiiiiny bit less

Vladdy Bladdy

There's no such thing as too much breasts! Also yeah, this looks good.

Alex Krycek

I honestly love how massive her breasts are; helps her stand out when compared to the other ladies. I agree with Rikhter on the traps. Personally, I like smaller nipples and those abs look awesome; the bulge is okay in my book but if it needs editing that's cool with me.

riv3th3d

She's awesome! Just a few opinions: 1) her last row of abs is kinda odd bulging that much; 2) her arms are bigger than her legs! I think that with that kind of arms she should have bigger legs and bigger traps; 3) those huge breasts could use bigger nipples ^^. Of course I already love her the way she is now!

John Rikhter


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