Minerva's graphic ACT2

Yeah, I finished the color version some minutes ago and I think you may be right. Her arms and abs are somewhat covered by her breasts.

ReddyHeart

I actually think her breasts could be just a tad smaller so as not to completely overshadow the rest of her physique.

tropetweeter

That's great! Also, uh, I've mentioned this, but the glasses/visor seems out of place lol

Dalpy

Yep I agree too. The waist is too small for a torso so big. And she have a big and roundy butt, i completely forgot that aspect of her. I will complete the color work and make some improvements in the proportions.

ReddyHeart

Yes, I still have to add the hexagon patterns. I will add some straps in the torso too.

ReddyHeart

I figured as much, she looks awesome tho keep it up as always

toadprince

She has a face? :P

Pixelpapst

Well I dont draw shit, so I dont know about tones and shit, so that's up to you. But seriously man, the waist especially seems like it could be reworked.

Dalpy

Thanks!

ReddyHeart

Thanks! I wanted to make her pretty bulky. She would make sure to be the biggest girl in the ship.

ReddyHeart

I thought in using a black outfit instead but the colors sometimes doesn't help the volume of the muscles. I would have to use four or five tones. But I agree the bra thing could be better. I will review the graphic soon. I might have a better idea by there.

ReddyHeart

She could use a bigger hip, I agree with you. And longer legs.

ReddyHeart

Yeah, I will add more veins in her abs and add more details to her arms.

ReddyHeart

Her event will be very cool because she will tease and push Shepherd all the time.

ReddyHeart

I put those sleeves for being ripped afterwards. I am worried her face will be hard to notice because of her huge body.

ReddyHeart

Wow, even bigger breasts and shoulders?! She's going to be absolutely enormous after her next muscle growth scene! I like that the colours are the same as her original outfit, and the holes in the sleeves for her biceps is a cool touch, too. It's not like she'd be able to find much that could contain them anyway. :p Good stuff!

The Alternate202

Wow she looks so cool. Those biceps looks like they just bursted right through her sleeves. "Want to take a reaper destroyer down, Shepard?!" :P

Pixelpapst

I blame lack of shadows. Also I think some textures can do the trick. Like those hexagon patterns on clothes her original have. Maybe some more clothes (oh god, I actually said that?) on upper part of body to make it look more ... holistic is the word, I think? Those runes on her shoulders were a little nice touch too.

Alex Krycek

Bigger is better:D I think she looks great so far I think she should have more veins like on her arms abs and such

toadprince

I don't know... She looks a little dull. Something's missing but I can't find what at the moment, sorry. And the first time I saw the pic I thought to myself "Wow, she's going to break in half." Maybe a waist a little wider may do the trick to get rid of this impression.

CJoe

Eeeeeh. Kinda not feeling it with this one. I mean, apart from the whole "Impossible Clothes" angle - the way her bra thing and arm things shouldnt even hold in place. I think her torso could be a bit less elangolated, like Mack's or Masara's. Also, her visor/glasses just don't fit at all. And she looks like she's in a fit of heavy pouting, so maybe change up a facial expression. <a href="http://social.bioware.com/uploads_project/project_gallery/3000/2827/1671/4922.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://social.bioware.com/uploads_project/project_gallery/3000/2827/1671/4922.jpg</a> I'd much rather a variation of her black alternative outfit, sorta like in a pic above. Maybe give her a unique feel by having less skin exposed to show that she's supposed to have that ship authority? But that's all just my opinion lol

Vladdy Bladdy

Mmmmmm, bigger breasts and wider shoulders you say? WONDERFUL!!!

She's a BEAST!!!! My god man adding wider shoulders and larger breasted as well?! I like where this is going!! I love how large her traps are as well :)

Dac

Also, Lima sequence sounds awesome.

riv3th3d

Daaaaaaaammmmnnn. Bigger breasts and shoulders? Hells yes.

riv3th3d