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Mack's Bio file 1 Sample

This is the muscle level 0(normal) grapfic for Mack's Bio file.

I am using the same "skeleton" of Lima because I want all the character to keep the same design. Of course, the poses and body measurements will differ.

She have smaller breasts compared to Lima, but now, I think they could be smaller. She have more beefier arms, but the legs are a bit less meaty. And she is bald.


I chose to make her using sneakers than heels. I think the character would'nt use heel at all.


What do you think? The next one will be Bali. Of course, she will be wearing bikini. But still wearing the helmet/mask thing.


Why?


Why not?

Mack's Bio file 1 Sample

Comments

Well, I honestly like her design! Can't wait to see what will happen to her!

EoBeMa

She will have the tattoos, don't worry.

ReddyHeart

plz add tattoos lol, she looks like a big baby without em

Vladdy Bladdy

Thanks! Another mistake fixed. I will post a 5.2 version soon. This will be the last addition to the prologue and first act. After this I will only work on the second act. Well, mostly. If i see something can be improved, I will do it.

ReddyHeart

Yep, there we go. She's a doctor, so of course she'd make sure these tests were conducted properly. This is for science, after all! ;) Oh yeah and I found one more minor error in the beta (not a bug though). In Bali's act 2 scene, if you choose the middle "Admiral?" (Daddy?) option during the dialogue choice, the last line of that conversation has Shepherd's name as the person speaking, when it looks like it should be Bali ("Thank you..."). I'll continue to keep an eye out for anything else, but at this point I'd say it's likely to be pretty much error-free!

The Alternate202

She looks pretty different without it. Let's compare later after inserting the tattoos.

ReddyHeart

Yeah, me too. I knew something was missing. I will do the tattoos later. About Bali, the doctor made a hyperbaric chamber or something like that just for that. Yep, the problem is solved and now we are good to go.

ReddyHeart

Yep, that's something she wouldn't do, maybe at gunpoint. And the heels would be piss her off even more.

ReddyHeart

But she will get them in the final version. Sorry...

ReddyHeart

woo! no tatoos!

Wwolfneo

Its a winner, I like the look of mack here.

dbjwhite@hotmail.co.uk

Smile for the file Mack! If you do there might be an extra few cc's of might in it.... *wink, wink* Love the "why am I doing this" look she has on. ^_^

Cari

You know I didn't even realise Mack didn't have any tattoos the first time I looked at that pic until Joe pointed it out! :p I like that she has a sort of "urgh, do I really have to be here?" look on her face, it's very fitting. As are the sneakers, which are definitely more her kind of footwear compared to heels, like you say. Plus the slight variations in body size compared to Lima. She looks good, nice work! And "why not?" is definitely the best reason for Bali to be wearing a bikini! :) I'm sure these initial tests were conducted in a sterile environment, after all. ;)

The Alternate202

Oh, a normal looking Mack, without almost any tattoo. She's really cute, but still has her rebel attitude. Nice :)

CJoe


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