Samples of Mack's MBS

Her bald head is definitely NOT a turnoff, fact is, it makes her arms seem thicker. Well done and a BIG thanks.

I see. I had a feeling that might have been the case. Well there's a few options you could potentially try if you're feeling that way. As I say, you could always give her the shaved head look rather than completely bald, as she has in act 1. Or you could maybe see what her head and face looks like with a few less of the 'act 2 tattoos' on it and see if you like that look any better. Then there's always the option of giving her some pupils, perhaps. Personally I think it's a cool idea you went with and makes her look more powerful, but if you're worried about her maybe looking a big ugly then that's something that could possibly help in that regard. Finally, you could maybe have a look at giving her a hair style like she has in ME3, since I thought they did a very good job there of giving her some actual hair but still having it fit her personality: <a href="https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/4c/9f/2d/4c9f2d9e4438d9028849edf8d6e930c1.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/4c/9f/2d/4c9f2d9e4438d9028849edf8d6e930c1.jpg</a> <a href="https://collegeage.files.wordpress.com/2012/04/jack.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://collegeage.files.wordpress.com/2012/04/jack.jpg</a> It looks like it might no be that hard to add, since there's not a lot of it, and there would only be certain frames where you'd see it from behind. But either way, it's an option. I'm sure you'll come up with something cool no matter what you decide to do though; even if you don't change anything at all! ;)

The Alternate202

Yeah, a tomahawk might looks good. Or we can try a hair more... simple. The character is a bit rebellious, I don't she will would waste time to maintain a hair cut like that. Maybe something like... her hair grew and simply doesn't care. I will make some tests. I am just worried she is becoming the "ugly duckling" of the game.

ReddyHeart

Yeah I think it looks good. She always had a bald head throughout the second game, or at least a shaved head like you gave her in the first act. Why's that, are you unsure about how it looks or thinking of doing something different? If so, you could always just go with the same sort of shaved head look she has in first act. It'd still keep that element of baldness, but be easy enough to add to the frames you've already drawn, rather than drawing in some new hairstyle or something. Unless I'm just reading too much into your comment, in which case you can disregard that. ;p

The Alternate202

you could give her a punk rock tomahawk

Dalpy

I will make some versions with a blue tattoo and a lighter black tattoo. By the way, about her bald head. What do you think of it?

ReddyHeart

Yeah, it worths a shot.

ReddyHeart

Yeah, that's the spirit! Nothing good will come for that!

ReddyHeart

Good point. I will try some things first, like lighten the tattoos.

ReddyHeart

Wow, a backwards bicep flex! Cool! Nice idea for showing how big Mack's muscles can get that she's able to flex her bicep so largely doing the *reverse* of what most people do! This tattoo-less version already looks great! And yes, that sounds like a good idea about the tattoo colours, since as you say, them being so dark could indeed pose a problem as far as making out the muscle detail goes. Light blue seems like a good colour to go with, since biotics have a "blue glow" to them, so it would make sense. It would be as though not only her muscles had grown super-powerful, but also her biotics had grown so strong that they made a visible blue glow on parts of her body while she's flexing and becoming even bigger/stronger here. So yes, that sounds like a nice and fitting solution to the problem! I look forward to seeing what you come up with, as these frames are already looking mighty great to begin with!

The Alternate202

will i like the tattooless version, well see how they look likei n bule :)

Wwolfneo

Oh shit, something will definitely break a part. Run Shepard :D

Pixelpapst

one step at a time

David

Looks like One Punch Man. Also IMHO keep the tattoo's black, she barely has any distinguishing features as it is.

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