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Bali's MBS sketchs

This is the rest of the sketchs. My idea is to make the sequence somewhate cute and light. In the 4th and last part, she breaks the mask by a spontaneous muscle growth.

Now about the design of her face. We discussed a bit over this in this post: https://www.patreon.com/posts/spoiler-alert-of-3256400

Give a look. I will follow what we discussed there meanwhile.

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But that's a Predator. I don't want the scene to be that shocking. Let's keep the original design.

ReddyHeart

Removing the helmet is the tricky part, I think the character wouldn't remove the mask, making it look like a accident would make this unexpected and funny.

ReddyHeart

Well that's one way to break her helmet (I guess the only other realistic options were either having her rip it apart right off of her head or taking it off and crushing it, given that it's not the easiest piece of clothing to imagine being destroyed via muscle growth)! Keeping this sequence light sounds like a good idea. It looks like she's really getting in to it there too in the part 3 images, as I imagine she would given the circumstances! My feelings about her face are still the same as they were on that older page, so I won't bother rehashing them here (wow, has it really been over a year already since you posted that?! Where does the time go?), except to say it sounds like you're on the right track with that. Can't wait to see more!

The Alternate202

I liked the first few Bali sketch sequences better, this is alright, but kinda looks too similar to Lima's. Also my preference is still alien face quarians, cause it'd be funny and cute and fuck biowares and their lazy modeling <a href="http://art.ngfiles.com/medium_views/200000/200323_theshadling_pretali.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://art.ngfiles.com/medium_views/200000/200323_theshadling_pretali.jpg</a>

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