New design for FMG reports
Added 2017-03-13 19:40:28 +0000 UTCIt's me again. I did think a lot of this weekend and I found two ways to cover the first muscle growth. Instead focusing in a medical/scientific kind of narration, I thought in making it in first person. Or by the eyes of a third person, Penny.
The first model: We would have the same layout of the game but instead impersonating Shepherd, each girl would be the main character of their own FMG report. We could even use the same features, choosing options, etc. It would work like a mini-event and in the end we would get a muscle growth, not a big one because its the beginning. But they would be wearing small bikinis and it would be easier to rip them.
The second model: I would make it based on the Xmas story. Penny is trying by herself to learn more about the tech. She will use her stealth skills and gather data of the muscle growths.
That's it. I think these models are more engaging and more related to the game mechanics. And it would offer some interesting content too, I didn't think about the length of the reports, but it will be easy to fill them up. We would have the normal graphics(no muscles) and the FMG scene of the end(some 4, 5 frames).
What do you think? Which model do you prefer?
Comments
Got it.
ReddyHeart
2017-03-16 11:31:04 +0000 UTCi like the first model idea
2017-03-15 19:15:06 +0000 UTCYep, the graphics are the main feature of the game. Both models will have new graphic sets.
ReddyHeart
2017-03-15 12:28:05 +0000 UTCI like the idea of the first person narration. But honestly the best part of this is adding some cool visuals.
CopycatPasta
2017-03-15 00:38:36 +0000 UTCNo worries, I will make samples.
ReddyHeart
2017-03-14 12:11:19 +0000 UTCBoth models will have the same content, the FMG scenes will be the same. The difference will be in the narrative: model 1 will have each girl as main characters in their reports, on the 2nd model Penny is the main character. The rest is basicly the same.
ReddyHeart
2017-03-14 12:11:00 +0000 UTCYes, "Penny mode" looks interesting. We basicly would have the content of the 1st mode plus Penny.
ReddyHeart
2017-03-14 11:58:33 +0000 UTCNo problemo, you are doing alright. Yes, I plan to resume the comic, I didn't decide the rest of the story yet.
ReddyHeart
2017-03-14 11:56:46 +0000 UTCI did think over that, but I can't add more stuff. The game is already huge.
ReddyHeart
2017-03-14 11:55:05 +0000 UTCI said first person but it's just the narrative. The graphic will be like the others.
ReddyHeart
2017-03-14 11:53:58 +0000 UTCGot it!
ReddyHeart
2017-03-14 11:52:08 +0000 UTCYeah, both models looks nice. But we can't have both.
ReddyHeart
2017-03-14 11:51:14 +0000 UTCYep, we will get lots of interactions. Lima will try to use the tech before Minerva. Mack will try to get more tech for her. Bali will be kidnapped by the others girls. Lot's of things to explore.
ReddyHeart
2017-03-14 11:48:27 +0000 UTCOh, no, no. It's the gameplay which will be on "first person". The main character being the girl not Shepherd. The graphics will be like the others.
ReddyHeart
2017-03-14 11:44:57 +0000 UTCThanks!
ReddyHeart
2017-03-14 11:43:38 +0000 UTCSure, I can make samples for both models.
ReddyHeart
2017-03-14 11:43:29 +0000 UTCGot it.
ReddyHeart
2017-03-14 11:42:12 +0000 UTCI like both ideas , this is definitely going in the right direction, to be fair I'm not sure which I would choose.
dbjwhite@hotmail.co.uk
2017-03-14 09:06:16 +0000 UTCI think they both sound great, but I feel like there could be more room for variety with the first option, since each girl would react differently to the growth, so it might make each scene feel a bit more unique since they'd each be from the point of view of a different person. But the second one would also fit well with the prologue, showing how Penny came to be aware of the MIGHT use in the first place. So yeah, both great, but if I had to vote it'd be for the first one (especially since "small bikinis" xP ).
The Alternate202
2017-03-14 04:25:43 +0000 UTCThe first one is straight forward. The second is more intriguing and that's the one I vote for.
2017-03-14 00:27:30 +0000 UTCand in the comics if you want it complete flashback or a cam with liara and miranda after they're. for the sequence fmg.
2017-03-13 22:28:30 +0000 UTClanguage
2017-03-13 22:23:05 +0000 UTCsorry i am not very good in this
2017-03-13 22:22:44 +0000 UTCand after this her
2017-03-13 22:20:59 +0000 UTCAfter the injection of dr chakwas with the other girl who have the injection before her.
2017-03-13 22:20:25 +0000 UTCA sort of part 2 of the penny comics
2017-03-13 22:18:52 +0000 UTCWhy not the two one in the game another in bonus when you finish this game sorry not my language.
2017-03-13 22:08:43 +0000 UTCI like both ideas, I think I like 1 more. though if you go that way no pov I would rather see the whole growth of the women rather then parts.
camel
2017-03-13 21:46:45 +0000 UTCI think the second might be more interesting
tropetweeter
2017-03-13 20:44:08 +0000 UTCBoth sound so good it's hard to choose, I do like the idea of Penny peeping on them trying to figure things out and seeing them grow. One way or the other there is no loss. ^_^
Cari
2017-03-13 20:18:47 +0000 UTCIDK, I kinda prefer Penny spying on the girls. I'd also kinda like the idea of them tryin to impress Shep and tryin on different otufits and maybe getting in a rivalry between each other, y'know some interaction between girls
Vladdy Bladdy
2017-03-13 20:18:39 +0000 UTCthe first one look great, it'll be original to have POV muscle growth sequence ;D
Corentin Broquet
2017-03-13 20:07:19 +0000 UTCI think both models very cool)
2017-03-13 20:07:04 +0000 UTCCan you do upload a szene sketch or something like that, please? I'm a fan of pictures and I'm not sure if I have understand it right.
Pixelpapst
2017-03-13 19:57:03 +0000 UTC
