Bali's MBS update

Eeek. That's bad! I tried to make her cute!

ReddyHeart

Got it. That was the ideal design I was looking for. But the result didn't turned out good. I will work on this better. Maybe doing it like a bug eye.

ReddyHeart

Face 1. Two looks like Batou from Ghost in the Shell.

tropetweeter

I'm for the black color around her eyes.

Pixelpapst

Yeah, it needs some adjustments.

ReddyHeart

Yeah... that might work. I will experiment with this.

ReddyHeart

Got it!

ReddyHeart

Got it. I will work on these eyes more.

ReddyHeart

You are right, a longer hair will look better. The colors aren't adjusted yet. But I will work on those eyes more, maybe doing it in a diferent way.

ReddyHeart

That would be interesting to see, a realistic face.

ReddyHeart

I will insert Bali's MBS graphics soon, in this month yet. Then I will mount another Beta. I can unlock a bit more of Mack's MBS. With all Bali's graphics inserted in the game, I can say the game is around 80% finished. The rest is the others three girls's MBS, the 4 ending graphics and the Bio files graphics. And the FMG report.

ReddyHeart

Can't wait to see how big she gets. When might the next beta come out? Will it also have the last part of Mack's MBS? What % of the game will be finished by then?

omicron654

I think she looks sufficiently alien. Great hair and shining, mysterious eyes that contain all the wonder of the universe.. I like. d('-' ) For giggles, you could try making her face look as realistic as possible. _That_ would make her alien compared to her peers. ^^

Yargh

Wow, that arm is looking incredible!! You can practically see the power in that gigantic purple bicep! The last part of her MBS looks like it's going to be immense, I can't wait to see it! :D As for her face, I definitely agree with you about the eyes. I prefer the white version as well. The black just looks "off"/not as good somehow. Maybe a bit *too* alien/creepy? Either way, I definitely prefer the one with the white sclera. The (super controversial!) face itself I have no problem with though, except for thinking that maybe the lips might look a little too bright, perhaps? It's Hard to say what her lips really look like even with that image from the game, but maybe a slightly darker shade of purple might make them stand out a little less? Or they could look fine and it's just me. ;p One thing I do think I preferred from your original sketches though was her hair. I think I preferred how she looked with the fringe and with the hair being a bit longer (and maybe fuller?). Looking back at those older sketches now I remember pics 1 & 4 being my favourites, which look very close to what you went with for her face (yay!), just with slightly different hair. But either way, you'll be presenting this one in-game, so you'll undoubtedly cause way less controversy with your version than the original one did! Huzzah!:D Oh yes, and very nice idea with the option to keep her helmet but having it slightly damaged. It's the best of both worlds, the MBS has an impact on it after all, but you can keep it if you want to! Yay for multiple options, Shepherd would be proud! :D

The Alternate202

Maybe her eyes are a bit too big, For now I prefer the white sclera version, but if they were less cartoony, the black one could be great.

CJoe

Great arm!! Her face needs a bit of work though. A simple not too drastic alien touch would be for her to have no nose, everything else as is.

the bug eyed stare reminds me of tree witch from adventure time lol <a href="http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/adventuretimewithfinnandjake/images/1/19/Tree_Witch2.png/revision/latest?cb=20110114081134" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/adventuretimewithfinnandjake/images/1/19/Tree_Witch2.png/revision/latest?cb=20110114081134</a>

Vladdy Bladdy

I like the eyes n all, but the spacing between nouth and mouth looks really creepy. You should tweak it...

Vladdy Bladdy