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Beta 8.05

Whew! Download it from here:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/bxnxs9ft1p55pc6/Beta%208.05.swf?dl=0

or play through here:

http://www.reddypics.com/game/

The sex scene of Masara is completed and now you can play her second event through the event viewer. I tested the hell of it, please give a look on it, the MBS and sex scenes, etc. Don't mind the errors in the text, this will be fixed soon.

NOW, Minerva's sex scene. Tomorrow morning I gonna post the nex sketch. See you there.

Comments

Welcome. That part is not complete yet. I will be finishing all the events of the second act soon.

ReddyHeart

eh......I just join in the game, I don't know why the game cannot run, it stuck at lavanda's office of act 2

VincentZ

Thank you! I fixed all those issues. All the text will be ready to be reviewed soon. I am writing the rest of text right now. It's a lot of stuff and yet the game still looks short.

ReddyHeart

I am glad you liked!

ReddyHeart

Yes. The game will have some changes to show her as well. But that will be after the main game is complete.

ReddyHeart

Yes, she will try to impress and hurt Shep in the same time.

ReddyHeart

It's the biggest project I ever done. I can't wait to complete it.

ReddyHeart

The whole scene is great! Like all the girls she definitely plays like a more extreme, less inhibited version of her act 1 self, just as she should! I like the joke about Masara's XP already being maxed out because she bought the deluxe version, as opposed to Shepherd's standard edition. XD And it figures she'd feel that way after tracking down Morinth now too. Almost makes me wonder if she'd consider giving her the MIGHT, or if she'd want to keep that all for herself. I know it hasn't been through the spellchecking phase yet but I did notice a couple of errors regarding who it says is speaking at certain points that might be helpful regardless, if it's of any use to you: Right before the choice about what you did with the black market gun merchants on the Citadel it looks like it should be Masara speaking the line, but the text says Shepherd. Also when she starts talking about Grunt it says "undefined", and when Masara says "let's dance for the last time!" after her MBS the next line "oh shit!" looks like it should be spoken by Shepherd, but it has her listed instead. Also the line "what are you doing?! My clothes?!" looks like it should be spoken by Shepherd too, since Masara is already very naked by that point! XD And at the start of the sex scene the line "I-I see. Well… I think I don’t have a choice, don’t I?" says Masara is speaking it rather than Shepherd, and the next couple of lines immediately following it also seem to have the speaker's names mixed up. Once again, great work on this whole scene! The dialogue, the MBS, the sex scene, it all looks and plays really, really great (and I didn't hit any errors on my playthrough, but again, more are surely needed: for science)! Another excellent job indeed!

The Alternate202

the Masara sex scene is one of my faves.

kringles31

Are you still planning to implement female shepard?

General Dagour

I hope that that Minerva's scene is a violent one like Mack's

Ranger Fan

The sex scene is awesome I didn’t see any issues with it. It’s great to see this game getting closer and closer to being done.

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