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Minerva's fatality update

Hello! 

This sequence is getting pretty complicated. After dozens of tries this is my best approach to the animation. Its not finished, I am still working in the details of the parts. 

My idea is to give her butt a very solid and hard look, muscular. Not just big. As I said, I am still working on it but my eyes are a bit tired now, I need a new pair, yours. No, I don't want your eyes to replace mine, just your opinion and validation of the animation.

That's it for now. I am already working in Penny's fatality too. It's looking a bit different from the sketchs. 

Comments

Granted I'm commenting on weeks-old work at this point, but it looks like everything gets a little slanted/stretched/distorted in that final frame of part 1 there that sort of makes it look a bit "off" (mostly Shepherd's head and Minerva's torso, which ends up looking a bit flat around the shoulders as a result). But it definitely looks better in the more recent version with the added frames and the full 'part 2 head crushing', not only because it's obviously more complete but also the way you have her back sort of swelling up there helps make it look much less flat than it does in that one frame. But that's just me commenting on that particular aspect of it with "my eyes", which you're likely already passed now anyway. ;p And her butt certainly looks hard and muscular rather than just big, which is great. It definitely looks like something she could crush heads with, that's for sure! And the way they "rumble" right before his head explodes is a neat touch too, as is the very quick head shaking by Shepherd before it goes boom. Those are the sort of things that really help gives these scenes some extra "oompf" (or in Shepherd's case, "ouch!" XP )!

The Alternate202

I am happy that you liked it!

ReddyHeart

I liked it too, I didn't want to make it too seriously.

ReddyHeart

Thanks!

ReddyHeart

I like to give a time, do something else and return to it later. A lot of new ideas just appears from nothing sometimes.

ReddyHeart

Yeah, that's almost a new genre.

ReddyHeart

Thanks!

ReddyHeart

Got it. I will try to fix that.

ReddyHeart

My pair of eyes approves greatly. :)

CJoe

I like the look of horror on Sheps face.

dbjwhite@hotmail.co.uk

seem super good to me :o

Corentin Broquet

I don't really actually know how to make it better. It's a hard one. It's certainly fun thoug

UCHoodman

That's a fun idea

UCHoodman

also I think there's one frame missing of her breast?

Vladdy Bladdy

Kinda looks like basketballs with that muscle stretch, I think it would be better if he was deeper up her butt, and we dont really see his head, cause this is a bit awkward...

Vladdy Bladdy

if possible im for the twerking idea aswell....but fatality wise maybe while twerking, tearing his head off? Other than that i realy like the idea and execution currently, it makes sense because her butt always was one of her trademarks :D

Lurr king

Death by Asari is ,not lying, a fetish of mine.

Melkhiordarkblade

Nice idea to make them muscular when flexed.

Arkus0

Shep's face curves to the right as her butt expands. . . . .I would like to see her butt cover his face and twerk for a few seconds. I'm not into the blood and I would like to see a quick finish.

Dick Cheney


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