Xmas story- Pages 23, 24 and 25
Added 2018-12-28 18:38:22 +0000 UTCMore pages! Super Bali was chosen and she will appear in the next pages. I am making a picture of Futa Bali, so everyone will get something!
Ah! Tell me if you find some spelling error, I didn't review these pages.
See ya!
PS- Happy new year!
Comments
I like to make these panels, before and after. It's simple and effective!
ReddyHeart
2018-12-31 12:12:19 +0000 UTCThanks, I am fixing it!
ReddyHeart
2018-12-31 12:09:39 +0000 UTCYou are welcome!
ReddyHeart
2018-12-31 12:09:07 +0000 UTCThank you!
ReddyHeart
2018-12-31 12:08:55 +0000 UTCI am glad you liked! The next one will be pretty interesting!
ReddyHeart
2018-12-31 12:08:39 +0000 UTCThose are some freaking awesome pages right there!! Nice way of obscuring Bali's face on the first page, as well as just a really cool idea to have that "explosion" of power to start things off. And I've always loved those "big body part/bigger body part" comparison panels of yours; with these ones being a prime example as to why! XD She's already big and buff, and now she's getting even bigger and buffer! Amazing work! This is most definitely a Happy New Year indeed! XD
The Alternate202
2018-12-30 03:41:37 +0000 UTCOn page 23 the bottom right bubble. I can’t lose this FMG scene. (I)must not happen again. Should be (it) must not happen again. Just to let you know of spelling error. But man these are great!
1289dude
2018-12-29 16:01:40 +0000 UTCNice to see how far this is going, nice treat
Red Silver
2018-12-29 13:09:32 +0000 UTCWell so far this is turning out beautifully!
Klesk Vadrigaar
2018-12-29 03:07:23 +0000 UTCThe cork pops early this year! <3
2018-12-29 00:01:10 +0000 UTCI think I'm suffering a bit of blood loss due to the nosebleed I got from these pages... Now I can't wait until next week for the next ones!
Reza0807
2018-12-28 18:48:49 +0000 UTC
