"Yakumo & Yusuke" ⑬
Added 2022-06-24 00:42:46 +0000 UTC
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Thank you for pointing it out!🙇♂️✨✨
いさこ
2022-06-24 19:41:22 +0000 UTCThanks for the correction! Switching from presens (don't) to past (didn't) fits better :)
TagiruAkashi
2022-06-24 18:37:04 +0000 UTCI'm checking with the translator now. If you are told that you need to change it, I will change it!😊 thank you!😆
いさこ
2022-06-24 06:57:45 +0000 UTCOne more comment :) On the last page, Yusuke says "I can explain! I don't think you would mind if I took one." For me, the two sentences do not really connect. Personally, I think it sounds better to write instead: "I can explain! I thought you wouldn't mind if I took one." I am not a native speaker so I might be completly wrong :). Thanks again for your awesome work!
TagiruAkashi
2022-06-24 05:42:45 +0000 UTC😂
TagiruAkashi
2022-06-24 05:37:08 +0000 UTCI forgot to erase the numbers when I entered the English translation😂 thank you!✨
いさこ
2022-06-24 05:18:58 +0000 UTCThank you！🥰
いさこ
2022-06-24 05:18:41 +0000 UTCThank you very much! I just woke up and saw this new chapter. A perfect start into the new day :3 :3 There are numbers on page 4 (when Yakumo is walking down the stars). Is he counting to cool down? :)
TagiruAkashi
2022-06-24 04:51:59 +0000 UTCthx for the translation!! And, the underwear theif!!!
smmania135
2022-06-24 04:40:13 +0000 UTC
