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To Hell and Back: Chapter 5

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This is a very fun and unique story

M Znare

I probably put one too many growing's in there, lol.

Professor Quill

" Harry took particular pleasure in watching Umbridge stumble and bumble her way through the forest, her clothes growing and hair growing steadily more disheveled." So what were Umbridge' s clothes doing? I assume dirtier or more ragged are options but there are others. (I reject 'thinner' as I think Harry has higher standards.)

Brian Jordan

One other thought. It's kinky and in line solely with Pureblood tradition, but I wonder if Heather will make a deal with Harry.

Cateagle

Really enjoying the story. I can't help but look forward to Albus Dumbledore's reaction to Harry's return. With what he knows and can do, Harry's is really going to be a wild card for all (to use the title of an underappreciated novel by James Blish, a "Jack of Eagles" - i.e a wild card in a wild suite).

Cateagle

For those thinking we would be done at this point, I offer good news: No, The Professor has a bit more planned. Satan and Harry have a new agreement that will not be too easily resolved and Voldi is in even more trouble the we might have anticipated. Those who might feel sorry for Mr. Riddle need more help than I do (which is a rather frightening concept). I'm going to be interested in how long it takes Harry to get used to having to wear clothes. Also, given the ability to determine one's likely post- mortem destination Harry revealed, I have to wonder what happens should Mr. Potter need to deal with Professor Snape. Assuming (and I do) Dumbledore's spy is not beyond salvation, will Harry simply let events proceed without comment or try to prevent the worst ending for the greasy git, if only as a favor to his mother.? I suppose I'll have to read the next chapter to find out. The fact that I'm looking forward to it is of no great import. Honest. (Yeah, right.)

Brian Jordan

Really enjoying this story, can't wait for the next chapter

The Real

“He was really trying to kill me, wasn’t her?” she asked. wasn't he?

Chichi son

That was good! Solid chapter ending and totally left me wanting more!

Triple

Cool

Jeff

excellent, looking forward to more

Elias

Lol, i bet ginny enjoyed that view. Technically she never knew of course, still funny. Luna always makes great observations no he is in fact not a nargle.

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