SPIDER-MAN LOTUS CRITIQUE (first half)
Added 2023-08-18 20:37:37 +0000 UTCGuys I decided to genuinely critique the racist Spider-Man fan film! This is the first half, the entire thing will drop on Sunday. Really proud of how this is turning out
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ouch. I might not be a great writer but I can tell this is some bad writing.
Jesse gartung
2023-08-19 01:48:30 +0000 UTC
