[Early Access] Take Off S2 Ch.99 "Parallel Paths"
Added 2023-09-26 04:28:58 +0000 UTC
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It's here!! So many subway scenes!! I think last chapter I got something wrong: the ACE trains at Canal street is not Chinatown, but oh wells reverse gentrification let's goo. I dedicate this chapter to my love and hate relationship with the MTAπ«Ά
I hope you guys like this one!! And also remember to sign up to be on NSFW Zine Two's acknowledgements page by October 20th here: https://forms.gle/Yuumo5hydL31miye6
Thank you all so much for the patience as always and I'll see you guys soon with the camping smutπ
I love the end!!!!
Danyell Jones
2023-10-01 03:35:37 +0000 UTC
Yes, I agree. He just looks so down that u can so clearly read the emotion on his face. Poor baby π
PixelatedLove(qβ‘βΏβ‘q)
2023-09-29 18:38:32 +0000 UTC
Ugh π£ Im not patient enough for this. . I hate this for them. I hope they can both get off their trains and meet up.
PixelatedLove(qβ‘βΏβ‘q)
2023-09-29 18:37:14 +0000 UTC
The ANGST. I CANNOT
persophonebae
2023-09-29 04:26:58 +0000 UTC
WHATTTT THIS IS AN ILLEGAL CLIFFHANGER ππππππππ
persophonebae
2023-09-29 04:26:47 +0000 UTC
My brain keeps screaming "show him the phone goddamit! Do it! Do it now before the train starts moving!" Gah, my screams will go unheard and into the endless void of anxiousness
TheRealSnickers
2023-09-27 20:48:45 +0000 UTC
I am waiting PATIENTLY for the next chapter. I am waiting.... SO PATIENTLY...... ahhhhHHHH I need them to reconnect SO BAD
Lannah M.
2023-09-27 05:54:24 +0000 UTC
Andrew looked so freaking SHARP in that outfit π Nathanβ¦youβre going to have to RREEEAAAALLLYYY make it up to boyfriend.
Alexis Zoumberis
2023-09-27 01:14:11 +0000 UTC
Your drawing of dejected Andrew communicated his feeling so clearly!
TAC
2023-09-26 20:51:35 +0000 UTC
The anxiety π«
Love
2023-09-26 17:59:24 +0000 UTC
IM SO DEAD!!!
shebe96@live.com
2023-09-26 13:26:27 +0000 UTC
OMG! I just want to uuuhhhgg! *Me put my hands on authorβs shoulders, shake them back and forward aggressively𫨠and screams βWHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO US, STOP TORTURING US.βπ₯². I just want to see them together and happy. But I will wait obedientlyπ.
Michelle Watson
2023-09-26 13:01:03 +0000 UTC
I will reiterate my comment from last chapterβ¦ #paintrainπππ
Hereβs to hoping itβs a short ride to clear the misunderstanding and we can finally see our boys get a date πβ¨β¨β¨β¨β¨β¨β¨
Samaruo
2023-09-26 12:57:12 +0000 UTC
Hahaha amazing episode
Melon
2023-09-26 12:51:30 +0000 UTC
*in Darth Vader voice* NNNNOOOOOOOOO
JJ Connell
2023-09-26 12:14:22 +0000 UTC
WHATππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Tice Spire
2023-09-26 12:00:11 +0000 UTC
Gahhhh it means so much that you noticed the title being placed in the middle!!! Iβm glad it did what it did even if by a littleβοΈβ€οΈ
jui
2023-09-26 08:59:47 +0000 UTC
ππ
jui
2023-09-26 08:57:58 +0000 UTC
Idk if itβs just me missing drawing them on transportation but gah the subway scenes make me happyπ
jui
2023-09-26 08:57:38 +0000 UTC
So so close!
jui
2023-09-26 08:56:06 +0000 UTC
JUIIIIIIII πππ
Andrew I s2g if you donβt break down the train door now, imma jump in and hit the emergency strip on both damn trains so you both get off the train. GO TALK TO YOUR MANS NATHAN!!! RUNNNN
Wezzleh
2023-09-26 08:37:39 +0000 UTC
Ahahaπ nonono you can't do this π I mean it's good that he knows that he is at the wrong location but π it's heartbreaking to see them so sad.
I like how it feels that even though Nathan is in a train full of people he is "alone" at that moment - especially with the big city and "darkness" in the background.
And on the other side Andrew who looks so lonely in that restaurant ( the waitress is probably feeling just as sad as everyone π) and he looks sooo sad π like a puppy you put outside while it's raining! Please just give the man a big hug! And the spiral he is going down is so relatable. Lol in that one panel where the advertisement says "I hope" I was like "Yeah me too! I hope they run into each other!!". And I was hoping he would look up from his phone! I wouldn't have survived if one didn't see the other π
The whole scenario from both of their perspectives, Nathan wishing time would stop and the end where it probably did stop for them for a moment (and also feels like it from the outside) - that was great! And I love how you divided them and showing their parallel paths by using your Title right in the middle of the chapter! The movie feeling is on point.
Thank you Jui and your Team for the great chapter π! And the background work is awesome as always π it feels really nice reading through it.
Kiki
2023-09-26 07:15:24 +0000 UTC
I want to hug Andrew so much ππ
You'll get together my loves β€οΈ
Charliie Kreitzer
2023-09-26 06:54:54 +0000 UTC
WAHHHHHH
Ugh1ife
2023-09-26 06:25:58 +0000 UTC
Noooo Andrew baby he desperately trying to get to you π god I hope with that train part and they saw each other we get their reprieve pllleeeeeaasse your not a nuisance he likes you so much Andrew his phone is busted ππ₯Ί
VioletDash
2023-09-26 06:08:03 +0000 UTC
πππ why you two stupid trains are keeping them apart we need them to be together! π
Tamika
2023-09-26 05:53:28 +0000 UTC
Nooo. I dont want Andrew to be sad.
Meghan Matibag
2023-09-26 05:52:22 +0000 UTC
Noooooooo π₯Ί
The Moon Kissed Witch
2023-09-26 05:06:21 +0000 UTC
Daaaang... IN A WAY, we're touching on that "fate" conversation some chapters back.
Janoha Novella
2023-09-26 04:56:44 +0000 UTC
Noooo why u do this to us Jui π€§π€§π€§π₯²π₯²π₯²π₯Ίπ₯Ί
sekacecir
2023-09-26 04:39:29 +0000 UTC
His little sad face broke my heart ππ
julia sanchez
2023-09-26 04:38:29 +0000 UTC
NOOOOOO can they both get off the trains in time!!!
des
2023-09-26 04:37:17 +0000 UTC
I always read these chapters waaay to fast. π’
Kat V
2023-09-26 04:34:46 +0000 UTC
Noooo! Not them seeing each other going in opposite directions! π
Jo
2023-09-26 04:34:38 +0000 UTC
The gap of misunderstandings is only as wide as the space between 2 subway trains.
Fibber Fox
2023-09-26 04:34:05 +0000 UTC
TEASING ME FR FR
Logan Morace
2023-09-26 04:33:46 +0000 UTC
Like frrrrrπ₯²π₯²π₯² my heart, I think I read it too fast πππππ
Roses Haller
2023-09-26 04:33:10 +0000 UTC
Next chapter right now please and thank you.
Kat V
2023-09-26 04:32:31 +0000 UTC
Your subway scenes just do justice representing NYC I love it so much, but that last scene ππππ
Reina J. Ruiz
2023-09-26 04:32:22 +0000 UTC
YOU CANNOT DO THIS TO THEM OR TO US MANNNNNππππ
Yahir Garcia
2023-09-26 04:31:47 +0000 UTC
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Roses Haller
2023-09-26 04:31:26 +0000 UTC
My heart πβ€οΈ
Maddi Willis
2023-09-26 04:31:06 +0000 UTC