Work Begins On Chapter Five
Added 2024-01-02 22:08:36 +0000 UTCToday we have a little preview of a Lecture scene I'm working on. Lots of larger characters getting stuck, such is the fun of these new sizes. I've got one idea for an ending to this scene, but if anyone can think of another way this sort of situation could end then please comment below.
Comments
"Stuckage" What a word, I've got to get that into the story somewhere...
Daxe
2024-01-08 19:58:41 +0000 UTCHell yeah, always down for some stuckage.
Scrib
2024-01-03 18:11:26 +0000 UTCHonestly it's comments like this, it's nice get positive comments. And the negative one's too, that's the main way I know what needs improving.
Daxe
2024-01-03 12:55:30 +0000 UTCHow about the skinny characters feed the fat chracters until they burst out of their stuck situation?
Yuri7
2024-01-03 12:42:28 +0000 UTCHappy New year
Red Nior
2024-01-03 01:36:55 +0000 UTCOption to share snacks or eat them dictates which character has the embarrassment (loud belch or stuck scenario) which leads to comfort food and shenanigans or hurt feelings and threat of being kicked off team. Definitely want a sneak peek of Ash/MC's glutton arc coming to an end.
brendan johnson
2024-01-03 00:35:29 +0000 UTCThat double belly be blowing my mind
Bob Billing
2024-01-02 22:41:30 +0000 UTCA couple of different ways I imagine this could end: 1) Alissa gets into a food coma and passes out. Lots of ways for that to end (the character on the end having to rouse her being one). 2) Alissa gets told to leave the auditorium because she obviously cares more about food than the lecture. 3) This leads to the professor having a conversation with the cheerleading coach. You can do very different things from there, but maybe that helps with some ideas.
James
2024-01-02 22:29:19 +0000 UTCHappy new year! ๐ Thank you for all of your continuing hard work ๐ Out of supportive curiosity, what are some of the most gratifying things youโve gotten out of your project so far? ๐
jlixirium
2024-01-02 22:28:48 +0000 UTC
