Just too freaky.
Added 2024-11-02 14:36:53 +0000 UTCSoooo....Yeah, that last page (The Big Bust part 2 page 2) was just too freaky for me to keep it that way.
Sorry to everyone whose morning I may have thrown too much of a Halloween pumpkin on.
It was too much of a left turn from the rest of the Venus comic work. I'll upload the edited page later today.
Comments
Oh! Oh. Hmm. Ok. No need to go out on a limb there then. 😉
Julio Soto
2024-11-02 21:06:31 +0000 UTCIt was a combination of the face of the villian, plus the font you used for the speech bubble. You can do creepy, meng. How about..you do the conan stuff i mentioned on the other comment, something like that in a fantasy setting like that. Violent with creepy stuff. OR, you could do another villian centric tale with creepy stuff like that.
Tinhy
2024-11-02 21:05:32 +0000 UTCThis whole comic is going to be Hypno! XD
UDDERS Comix
2024-11-02 21:00:07 +0000 UTCImagine if Sam Raimi directed this page. XD
UDDERS Comix
2024-11-02 20:59:39 +0000 UTCYeah. I agree. I flipped though the older pages, and it was just too AHHH! XD Well, I learned a VERY valuable 3 hour lesson on a Saturday about 'Story Tone.'
UDDERS Comix
2024-11-02 20:59:08 +0000 UTCMore hypno stuff!
jeremy
2024-11-02 14:50:02 +0000 UTCWell damn, now I'm curious. I trust your judgement though!
Julio Soto
2024-11-02 14:46:34 +0000 UTCI mean, it just felt very out of place, for the usual storytelling that you do. It wasn't super fucking scary (watch the Uzumaki movie from 2000, that shit is fucking scary and gross). It just felt like a non standard UDDERS delivery hehe.
Tinhy
2024-11-02 14:40:06 +0000 UTC
