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Chapter 94, 95, and 96

  

Chapter 94

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correction "Goddamit Donut!!" have to use the catch phrase..lol

Grangel

Donut has a mind of a child, very emotional and direct so she lacks the filter needed to be considerate with sensitive matters. While it's not charismatically good practice to make jokes that offends the recipient, Donut's joke/quip probably wouldn't offend Carl as he's probably gotten used to considering her young but developing mental maturity. Besides, it's good banter =]

Mackoy

I'm *trying* to put together a map for earlier sections of this floor, but I do have a map for the end game. There are maybe some very light spoilers here, but I believe everything listed has already been mentioned in the existing chapters. https://i.imgur.com/IosGNu2.jpg

Matt D

Amazing set of chapters! I've got to say though that I have no idea what's happening with the tangle anymore. Tbh I am completely lost with all the different stations and tracks and portals. Would be super useful to have a map or, if that is too hard just an information table would be great that lists what is happening at all the major stations and lines.

Ray Burns

Thank you so much for publishing all three of these chapters together and not leaving us in suspenseful misery.

Cyclic Addict Recovering

Play stupid games win stupid prizes

Jacob

Son of a... that’s a hell of a bloody cliff hanger to leave us chomping at! Great trio of chapters though.

Attonranden

Oh, is *that* what it was? I missed that and was confused when Carl was talking about recognizing why Donut was reacting like that. Makes sense.

David K. Storrs

Why is everyone so mean to Carl? The assumption that he hated a plan because it wasn’t his and the constant put downs about not being able to keep Bea were pretty brutal.

Jordan

Duuude

J Berg

The golden skull kind of makes it clear though.

David Burchfield

Really looking forward to his reaction to it all, as well as what he has to say about the whole losing control thing

André Faes Oliveira

oof. Good catch. I fixed it.

Matt D

One other thing is Donut figured out that Beatrice was going to do with her. Explains why she reacted so hostile. Which will lead to either a conversation later or a heartfelt moment where no one talks.

arnumart

Ok so I expect for Carl and company to make a run for it. Than Carl will get a reputation for killing Hekla. Which will than involve the daughters trying to kill him while he tremors to avoid killing them because of morals. Personally I think it’s ok to kill someone trying to kill you but we will see how this goes.

arnumart

Mordecai is going to come back to some surprises thats for sure. Really glad Katia made it through so far, and definitely didn't see her accidentally killing Hekla.

Sickul

Hot damn I wasn't expecting that lol, frigging awesome Also isn't it supposed to be Katia's health here? "killing monsters while keeping eyes on Hekla's constantly dwindling health. was she getting shocked again?"

André Faes Oliveira

damn, that's that patreon subscription justified. that was an experience.

Joe ?

Whoaaa! Awesome job with these chapters.

The Lost Pages

They weren't trying to get rid of her per se. What I assume they wanted was to milk Katia for content. By getting a crazy reaction from Carl or Donut, they would've gotten a lot more views/followers/favorites and probably loot or interview opportunities. Hekla is very opportunistic and cold hearted.

Ligma

I am so confused right now, but I love it. We're they trying to kill her to get rid of her or what?

Bilbo Jerkins

Geezus Begeezus. This is fun.

Lord Falco

Fantastic

ZH

Great Chapter, savage Donut, Savage Katia. Not the way I saw it going down but perfect and awesome.

David Burchfield

I laughed. “Nobody is starting a harem.” “No, I suppose not,” Donut said. “You couldn’t even keep one woman interested.” Jesus Christ Donut.

Heraclitus

I was right about this ending in blood. So Carl will not leave Katia to die but I am sure the others will try to kill her. So PvP next chapter

arnumart

Well that's exciting

Salty Waters

It just keeps getting more amazing

TheyCallMeSibs

Whew, what a ride. Poor Katia, this is going to mess her up pretty bad. I'm not sure how the Daughters are going to react to Hekla's death, but it can't possibly be good.

Jon

HOLY FUCKING SHIT! Dude what the fuck, that was bat shit crazy! Legit so fucking exciting. On another note donut saying “No, I suppose not,” Donut said. “You couldn’t even keep one woman interested.” Was kinda fucking savage. I hope katia doesn’t die here but holy shit my god

Ethan Norton

Gods of Egypt and all the Ancients that was amazing!

Drew Murphy

A W E S O M E

Zy

Thank you for blessing us with an almighty 3 chapters. Holy fuck that was amazing. I need another hit...

Ligma

O.O. OH GEEZ.

Adam Barnes

*rapidly fanning self* Oh gods above...

Adam Barnes


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