Wolf-Cop Girl 04 - (Prelude: Man to Werewolf)
Added 2016-05-06 22:46:02 +0000 UTCSo this is the final edited shot, from here and out I'll be adding new content to this series in the upcoming weeks I hope.
And as I said before I'm no a good writer so I'm just trying to add more substance to the pictures with this story.You could give me ideas on what could happen with the girl :) - I'm open to suggestions.
Leo
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I started a story continuing off of this picture, it's going to be pretty long, but I'm sending you the first few paragraphs I've written by email. Tell me what you think! :3
BerryWhite
2016-05-08 00:29:38 +0000 UTCI know the meaning of the word, I think it still works in that manner of structure but it's quite possible that one way sounds more proper then the other does. I've used it several times in a similar manner and don't remember it being an issue, though if you want quicker and cleaner your manner is the way to go.
Cynfall
2016-05-07 02:13:00 +0000 UTCI suppose the girl could get mauled at the arm ? And then she immediatly start to change ? Great work, by the way ! :)
Goblinounours
2016-05-07 02:03:46 +0000 UTCI don't think "as incredulous as it sounded" works like you think it does. It's not the same as "incredible". I pretty sure the correct phrasing is "I told myself incredulously".
Goblinounours
2016-05-07 02:02:45 +0000 UTC"A Werewolf.." I told myself, as incredulous as it sounded. I started reaching nervously towards my gun. "Should I ask for back-up?" But....what....what could I possibly say?"
Cynfall
2016-05-06 22:56:42 +0000 UTC
