Alpha Luna Ch5. Page 26 (Scrapped Version)
Added 2016-05-15 00:01:19 +0000 UTCAs I mentioned in the previous post I ended up changing the bottom part of this part for the better, This happens when you don't have much of an idea of what you want to convey. The collar shot was redundant and the screaming of Luna trying to survive in the bottom wasn't saying anything new other than "Hey why does she looks human now?!" which I think is better understood in the final version.
Well in any case I hope you like the insight :)
Leo
Comments
So many different ideas. Always cool.
Cynfall
2016-05-15 00:16:11 +0000 UTC
